Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你校將于本周五上午舉行題為“Protecting wild animals” 的英文演講比賽，你將代表你班參賽，請你寫一份演講稿。內(nèi)容主要包括：

1.野生動物的生存現(xiàn)狀；

2.舉例說明保護(hù)野生動物的重要性；

3.你是如何做的。

注意：詞數(shù)100左右（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。

Good morning,everyone!

I’m more than glad to stand here and give a short speech on protecting wild animals.

Answer 1

【答案】Good morning, everyone!I’m more than glad to stand here and give a short speech on protecting wild animals. As is known to us, a large number of wild animals have been killed for their meat, skins, etc. As a result, thousands of animals have either died out or become endangered.Actually, protecting wild animals benefits not only the animals themselves but also humans. For example, if farmers killed too many eagles, their corn and grain would be destroyed by rats. The reason is that with no eagles to hunt rats, their number would increase quickly.Therefore, all of us must do something to protect wild animals. As for me, I have joined an organization in our town whose aim is to call on people to protect wild animals and I have taken part in several activities.Let’s take action to protect wild animals now!

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文。首先，學(xué)生要仔細(xì)閱讀提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。其次，要注意提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。最后，要根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣。本文要求以演講稿的形式介紹野生動物的生存現(xiàn)狀，保護(hù)野生動物的重要性以及自己的做法。首先確定文章的結(jié)構(gòu)為三段式.第一段介紹野生動物的生存現(xiàn)狀;第二段寫保護(hù)野生動物的重要性;最后一段寫自己的做法。文章可用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)描述。因為這個話題離學(xué)生生活比較遠(yuǎn)，學(xué)生寫起來可能覺得無話可寫。部分同學(xué)會出現(xiàn)內(nèi)容空洞，寫套話這樣的問題。因此還是要多去關(guān)注這些熱點話題，為作文多收集素材。

【亮點說明】這篇范文最大的特點就是行文非常連貫。里面運用了“as a result, for example, therefore, as for me”等承上啟下的詞語。此外，作者還運用了more than glad，As is known to us，非謂語動詞（protecting wild animals），表語從句（that with no eagles to hunt rats, their number would increase quickly），定語從句（whose aim is to call on people to protect wild animals）等高級句式。作者在論述過程中，點面俱全，有理有據(jù)，非常符合一篇演講稿的表達(dá)要求。