6.假定你是李華,你的加拿大筆友Jack來(lái)信說(shuō)他在學(xué)校舉行的詩(shī)歌朗誦賽(poetry recital contest)中獲得了一等獎(jiǎng). 請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件表示祝賀.
內(nèi)容主要包括:
1.表達(dá)你的祝賀;
2.欽佩他的付出;
3.請(qǐng)他給你推薦一些英語(yǔ)詩(shī)歌.
注意1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫;
Dear Jack,
I am glad to hear that you won first prize in the poetry recital contest held inyour school.(高分句型一) Please accept my sincere congratulations.It is indeed a remarkable thing for you to have achieved so great a success considering you once had great trouble reading poems out loud and were scared to speak in public.(高分句型二)It must feel great to finally see your efforts pay off.Your success again proved that where there is a will,there is a way.(高分句型三)By the way,I have become interested in English poems recently.So would you please recommend some good English poems to me?
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分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華,你的加拿大筆友Jack來(lái)信說(shuō)他在學(xué)校舉行的詩(shī)歌朗誦賽(poetry recital contest)中獲得了一等獎(jiǎng). 請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件表示祝賀,寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點(diǎn)包括:表達(dá)你的祝賀;欽佩他的付出;請(qǐng)他給你推薦一些英語(yǔ)詩(shī)歌.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě).本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):first prize 一等獎(jiǎng);considering考慮到,鑒于;have great trouble in doing sth在做某事方面有麻煩;By the way順便說(shuō)一下;become interested in對(duì)…感興趣;
I am glad to hear that you won first prize in the poetry recital contest held in your school.(高分句型一)
It is indeed a remarkable thing for you to have achieved so great a success considering you once had great trouble reading poems out loud and were scared to speak in public.(高分句型二)
It must feel great to finally see your efforts pay off.Your success again proved that where there is a will,there is a way.(高分句型三

解答 Dear Jack,
       I am glad to hear that you won first prize in the poetry recital contest held in your school.(高分句型一) Please accept my sincere congratulations.It is indeed a remarkable thing for you to have achieved so great a success considering you once had great trouble reading poems out loud and were scared to speak in public.(高分句型二)It must feel great to finally see your efforts pay off.Your success again proved that where there is a will,there is a way.(高分句型三)By the way,I have become interested in English poems recently.So would you please recommend some good English poems to me?
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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