【題目】假設你叫李華，是一家英文雜志社的心理咨詢師。某中學生小王給你寫信，提到自己偏胖，想節(jié)食減肥，征求你的意見。請你給她回一封信，談談你對該問題的見解。內(nèi)容要點如下：

1．健康比漂亮更重要；

2．學生以學習為主，不要過于注重外貌和別人的看法；

3．可通過多鍛煉身體保持健康，要改變不良的飲食習慣；

4．健康的心態(tài)也很重要。

注意：

1．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮；

2．詞數(shù)：100左右。

3．參考詞匯：state of mind 心態(tài)

Dear Xiao Wang,

I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.

____________________________________________________ _____________

____________________________________________________ _____________

____________________________________________________ _____________

【答案】

Dear Xiao Wang,

I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.

It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful．However, in my opinion, health is more important than beauty．For a student, studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second．So do not let others' opinions affect your normal life．However, if you do want to lose weight, it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits．The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind, as it will help with your studies, and will also help you overcome difficulties in dieting.

I hope my advice will be helpful to you and I'm looking forward to your next letter.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于書信類作文寫作，這也是一篇半開放性的作文。文章開頭結尾已經(jīng)給出，只需要表達清楚要點。寫作時首先要注意文章的段落結構，因為這是回信，所以第一段應該交代上封信的內(nèi)容，要解答的問題。第二段主要是給出筆者的建議。第三段總結。其中第二段是重點。在表達要點是切記不能逐字逐句翻譯，不能用漢語式的表達，這就需要用地道的英語句型，還要使用一些常用短語，這樣才能符合英語習慣，同時不僅要熟練的運用這些常用句型，而且要經(jīng)常嘗試不同的表達法，不能千篇一律，才能寫出好的文章。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，要將這些內(nèi)容在文中表達清楚。2、要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。本文寫作時要注意禮貌，不可太唐突。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，使用了很多地道的英語句型，如I have received and read your letter, in which you mentioned that you wanted to lose weight by dieting.這是非限制性定語從句的用法。還有It is only natural that young girls at your age hope to look beautiful. /it is a good idea to do it by getting more exercise and changing unhealthy eating habits ，it做形式主語也是英語中常用的句型。studying is the first thing to consider while appearance is the second這句話中，while的用法也很巧妙。另外名詞性從句也是英語寫作中常用的，如：The most important thing is that you keep a healthy state of mind。

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