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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換作文，請修改你同桌寫的以下文章。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)( )，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walk into my new high school. After visited the classroom, the volunteer took us to the dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates, two of which arrived later. I got to know my new roommate immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say “goodbye” to my father, but he had to leave to my hometown by train in the evening. It sudden hit me that I had grown up and I had to look after me and live independently. Only then I realize my senior high school life had really begun.

Answer 1

【答案】①walk改 walked ②visited改 visiting ③the改 a ④which改 whom ⑤roommate改roommates ⑥Although 和but去掉一個(gè) ⑦leave to 的to改為for ⑧sudden改 suddenly ⑨me改myself ⑩I realize前加did

【解析】本文是一篇記敘文，講述了作者第一次去高中校園的經(jīng)過。

考查時(shí)態(tài)。表示發(fā)生在過去的事情，用一般過去時(shí)，所以walk改為 walked。

考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。the volunteer與visit在邏輯上是主謂關(guān)系，所以此處用動(dòng)名詞的主動(dòng)形式作after的賓語，故visited改為 visiting。

考查冠詞。泛指“一名志愿者”，所以用不定冠詞表泛指，故the改為 a。

考查定語從句。這里含有一個(gè)定語從句，關(guān)系詞與two of一起在從句中作主語，先行詞是roommates，指人，所以which改為 whom。

考查名詞。根據(jù)Altogether I had five roommates, 可知我的室友是復(fù)數(shù)概念，所以roommate改為 roommates。

考查連詞。Although與but不能連用，所以Although 和but去掉一個(gè)。

考查固定短語。句意：但是他不得不坐火車回我的家鄉(xiāng)。leave for固定短語，“動(dòng)身去......”，所以to改為for。

考查副詞。副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，所以sudden改為suddenly。

考查代詞。句意：我突然想到我已經(jīng)長大了，必須自己照顧自己。所以me歸為 myself。

考查倒裝。only修飾句子的狀語（從句）位于句首時(shí)，句子（主句）要用部分倒裝。所以I realize前加did。