Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是高三學生李華，你的表弟王林今年將要上高中。請你給他寫一封郵件，從以下兩個方面提出建議，

學習方面；

課余生活方面。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；

4.信的開頭以為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Wang lin,

I’m glad to know that you are going to be a senior high school student this September. _________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Wang Lin,

I'm glad to know that you are going to be a senior high school student this September. As a senior 3 student, I have so much experience to share with you. High school life is full of challenges. Making good use of your time will be of great benefit to efficient study. It is also helpful to preview your lessons before class and take notes in class. High school life can be very colorful as well. I suggest you participate in some meaningful activities, such as sports and voluntary work to develop yourself properly and thoroughly. The coming three years will be the most beautiful time in your life. I believe that with your efforts, you'll make it fruitful and wonderful.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本文是應用文，要求學生就高中的學習狀況提出自己的建議，故應用一般現(xiàn)在時和第二人稱。

亮點說明：文章要點全，語法知識應用靈活，且使用得當，堪稱佳作。文中使用了分詞短語making作主語，現(xiàn)在分詞comig作定語；高級詞匯efficient，thorough等；不定式短語to preview作主語等都彰顯了作者的扎實的英語功底。