【題目】短文改錯(cuò)(共1小題)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之問(wèn)交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(^),并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用()劃掉。修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線,并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意:

1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

As far as I can remember, grow up in Ohio left many good memories and very few bad onesWe rented a home near a lake where I spent good time of my lifeI attended to school to learn a variety of course,and went camping overnight in the woodsMy dog and I would go fishing in the lake that I mentioned earlyDuring the winter we will come down at night and go ice-skating on the lakeIn Ohio the snow could be heavily sometimes and too deep to walk in as I was not that tall at the timeIt was not until I was sixteen and moved to California when the life was changedThis was a tough change for me because the area total differed from OhioThere was no rivers or lakes to fish in at a11

【答案】1grow → growing

2good前加a

3attended → wentto刪掉

4course → courses

5early → earlier

6will → would

7heavily → heavy

8when → that

9total → totally

10was → were

【解析】試題分析:

1grow改為growing 要用動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)。故grow改為growing。

2good前加a 玩的愉快,time是可數(shù)名詞。故good前加a。

3attended改為went去學(xué)校,go to school。故attended改為went。

4course改為courses 課程,course,為可數(shù)名詞。故course改為courses。

5early改為earlier之前,早前,用early的比較級(jí)。故early改為earlier。

6will改為would文章為一般過(guò)去時(shí)。故will改為would。

7heavily改為heavy此處要用形容詞修飾名詞。故heavily改為heavy

8when改為that 此句為強(qiáng)調(diào)句。故when改為that。

9total改為totally 要用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞differ。故total改為totally。

10was改為were 句型there be中的be動(dòng)詞形式要與后面的名詞一致,rivers為復(fù)數(shù)形式。故was改為were。

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