Question

10．請根據(jù)你對下面這幅圖的理解，以"What Do Grandparents Expect？"為題，用英語寫一篇150詞的作文．

你的作文應包括以下內容：
（1）簡要描述這喵圖的內容；
（2）結合自身實際，談談你的感想；
（3）舉例說明這幅圖對你的啟示．
WhatDoGrandparentsExpect？
It's a big festival．The grandparents have prepared a big dinner for the family reunion，only to find themselves alone at the table，with the gifts from their children on the chairs．How lonely and disappointed the couple are feeling．
In fact，what old people like them expect from their children and grandchildren is love rather than material stuff．Often the mere sight of their young generations can make them comfortable and satisfied．
The picture reminds me that I，together with my parents，should regularly visit my grandparents living alone on the other end of the town．My hugs will surely make them excited and my doing a bit of housework can more or less relax them．
In a word，however busy we may be，we should spend more time accompanying our parents and grandparents．Considering the sacrifices they've made for us，we should act in return for them．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
The grandparents have prepared a big dinner for the family reunion，only to find themselves alone at the table，with the gifts from their children on the chairs
祖父母們?yōu)榧彝�團聚準備了一頓豐盛的晚餐，結果卻發(fā)現(xiàn)自己獨自一人坐在桌旁，手里拿著孩子們放在椅子上的禮物．
高分句型二：
The picture reminds me that I，together with my parents，should regularly visit my grandparents living alone on the other end of the town．
這張照片使我想起我和我的父母，應該定期去看望住在城市另一端的祖父母．

解答 What Do Grandparents Expect？
It's a big festival．The grandparents have prepared a big dinner for the family reunion，only to find themselves alone at the table，with the gifts from their children on the chairs（高分句型一）．How lonely and disappointed the couple are feeling．
In fact，what old people like them expect from their children and grandchildren is love rather than material stuff．Often the mere sight of their young generations can make them comfortable and satisfied．
The picture reminds me that I，together with my parents，should regularly visit my grandparents living alone on the other end of the town（高分句型二）．My hugs will surely make them excited and my doing a bit of housework can more or less relax them．
In a word，however busy we may be，we should spend more time accompanying our parents and grandparents．Considering the sacrifices they've made for us，we should act in return for them．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內容、結構安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．