Question

 假設(shè)你是李華，你剛參加了某培訓(xùn)學(xué)校組織的“英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容， 寫(xiě)一封投訴信。

【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】

原來(lái)期望	提高英語(yǔ)成績(jī)
存 在 問(wèn) 題	1	一個(gè)班60多人，練習(xí)機(jī)會(huì)少
2	內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)單，話題陳舊，枯燥乏味
3	無(wú)午餐供應(yīng)，到最近的飯店吃飯要步行30分鐘
4	僅組織了一次羽毛球比賽，與廣告宣傳不符
描述你參加該活動(dòng)后的心情和提出你的賠償要求

【寫(xiě)作要求】

請(qǐng)用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容（信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總句數(shù)）。 

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

    句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I have just returned from the English Summer Camp at your School of Language, and I’m writing to express my unhappiness with your program.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

A possible version:

Dear Sir/Madam,

I have just returned from the English Summer Camp at your School of Language, and I’m writing to express my unhappiness with your program.

I took part in the program in order to improve my English but to my disappointment, there were too many students in a class, in which case students were not able to practise a lot. Moreover, the course was simple and the topics were not fresh enough so that students’ interest in English could not be aroused. Worse still, no lunch was provided and therefore I had to go to the nearest restaurant, which was 30 minutes away. It was once said in your ad that students could be provided with many chances to enjoy social practice but badminton was the only activity organized. You can imagine how upset I am to have wasted my time and money and please give half of my money back, or I shall be forced to take the matter further.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】 略