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17．抑郁癥（depression）是一種常見的心境障礙，對人的很多方面有影響．下面請你根據(jù)下表提示給你校英語報寫一篇文章簡單介紹其危害性及治療建議（第一句話已給出）．

抑郁癥的危害性	治療建議
1．這種強(qiáng)烈不良情緒會影響人的身心健康和社會行為； 2．嚴(yán)重的患者不能正常工作和生活，有傷心、無望等癥狀，更可怕的是，有自殺念頭．	1．應(yīng)樂觀面對，實際上抑郁癥是可以治愈的常見疾病之一； 2．應(yīng)及時治療，保持好心情； 最好的治療是藥物和心理（psychological）疏導(dǎo)相結(jié)合．

Depression is a common mental disorder which affects a person in many aspects…
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Answer 1

分析 本文為健康類主題寫作．
寫作主題為：抑郁癥的危害性及治療建議
寫作要點為：1，抑郁癥的危害；2，治療建議．

解答 Possible version：
Depression is a common mental disorder which affects a person in many aspects．It is a strong bad feeling that not only does harm to a person both physically and mentally，but affects his social behaviors．Those with severe depression suffer a great deal from the symptoms including  feelings of sadness，hopelessness and even worse，wanting to commit suicide，and consequently they find it difficult to continue their work or lead a normal life．
In fact，depression is one of the ordinary diseases that can be cured，so those patients with depression，first of all，should take a positive attitude towards it．Secondly，it is important for them to accept timely medical treatment and in the meanwhile they should learn to keep a pleasant mood．Actually，the best treatment is a combination of medicine and psychological help．
 
Another version：
Depression is a common mental disorder which affects a person in many aspects． It is a strong bad feeling that involves physical，mental and social behavioral changes in a person．Those with severe depression are even unable to continue their work or carry out normal daily activities with the symptoms mainly including feelings of sadness，hopelessness，sleeplessness and even worse，wanting to commit suicide．
In fact，depression is one of the ordinary diseases that can be cured，so those patients with depression，first of all，should take a positive attitude toward it．Secondly，it is important for them to accept timely medical treatment and in the meanwhile they should learn to release pressure and keep a pleasant mood．Actually，the best treatment is a combination of medication and psychological help．

點評 考生需根據(jù)所給的表格信息提煉文章的寫作主題，需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，仔細(xì)構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．考生在平時可關(guān)注熱點話題，積累相關(guān)詞匯，多思考自己的觀點，學(xué)會用英語表達(dá)．