Question

15．假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Peter即將完成學(xué)業(yè)，不久前來信就是否到中國工作詢問你的意見．請根據(jù)以下提示回一封電子郵件：
（1）建議他來中國；
（2）闡述你的理由（就業(yè)機(jī)會多、所學(xué)專業(yè)受歡迎、不同的文化體驗(yàn)等）；
（3）承諾可提供幫助．
參考詞匯：專業(yè) major
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)100～120；
（2）文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
（3）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Pete，
I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me last week．I have been thinking about the questions you asked me．From my point of view，you can choose to come to China afer finishing your studies．
For one reason，China's develpoment over the past 30 years offers quantities of job opportunities for the young．（高分句型一）What's more，what you are studying is badly needed in China nowadays．In fact，many big companied in our city are hoping to hire people like you．
For another reason，China is a country with so different cultures and traditions from the West that many foreigners enjoy living and working here．（高分句型二） Why not come and join them？I'm sure you'll adapt to the enviroment quickly．If you come，I will do what I can to help you．So what are you waiting for？
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇闡述觀點(diǎn)的作文．文章中給出了三條關(guān)于內(nèi)容方面的提示，這給考生提供了比較明確的寫作要求．考生必須在緊扣三條寫作要求的前提下，進(jìn)行合理的想象和拓展，使文章中心明確，語意連貫，具有說服力．
【考點(diǎn)提示】
1．全文采用第一人稱進(jìn)行作答．考生的身份是王華本人．
2．文章內(nèi)容必須包含三個方面：1．建議他來中國；2．闡述你的理由（就業(yè)機(jī)會多，專業(yè)受歡迎，不同的文化體驗(yàn)等等）3．承諾可提供幫助．
3．注意文章字?jǐn)?shù)要合理，100詞數(shù)左右，書法工整．
4．文章中考生盡量使用一些高級詞匯，多樣化的句型結(jié)構(gòu)，切忌同一句型重復(fù)使用．
5．注重文章中盡可能使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使文章更加連貫．
6．qualities of job opportunities 大量的就業(yè)機(jī)會 adapt to 適應(yīng)；why not+動詞原形，表示建議別人做某事
For one reason，China's develpoment over the past 30 years offers quantities of job opportunities for the young．（高分句型一）
For another reason，China is a country with so different cultures and traditions from the West that many foreigners enjoy living and working here．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Pete，
       I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me last week．I have been thinking about the questions you asked me．From my point of view，you can choose to come to China afer finishing your studies．
      For one reason，China's develpoment over the past 30 years offers quantities of job opportunities for the young．（高分句型一）What's more，what you are studying is badly needed in China nowadays．In fact，many big companied in our city are hoping to hire people like you．
       For another reason，China is a country with so different cultures and traditions from the West that many foreigners enjoy living and working here．（高分句型二） Why not come and join them？I'm sure you'll adapt to the enviroment quickly．If you come，I will do what I can to help you．So what are you waiting for？
       Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．