Question

【題目】假如你叫李華，你和筆友Jane互寄了全家的合影。Jane看了合影后來信問為什么你沒有兄弟姐妹。請用英語寫封100字左右的回信說明情況。內(nèi)容包括以下幾點：

原因	1．中國人口增長過快； 2．二十世紀八十年代開始實行計劃生育； 3．大部分中國家庭是獨生子女。
看法	1．能受到好的教育；父母關(guān)愛更多； 2．孤獨、自私，生活能力差；建議多交朋友。

注意：1．可適當增加細節(jié)使行文連貫；

2．字數(shù)100左右；

3．開頭已給出，不計人總字數(shù)；

4．參考詞匯；計劃生育family program獨生子女the only child

Dear Jane,

Thank you for your letter and the photo of your family.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jane,

Thank you for your letter and the photo of your family. Now I am writing to tell you why I am the only child in my family.

As you know, the population of China is growing very fast. In order to control the rapid increase of population, in the 1980s the government of China began to put into practice the family programme---- one child for each couple. As a result, most families have only one child. The child in the family can get more love from the family and chances to get better education. On the other hand, the only child is selfish, and not so independent. Sometimes they feel lonely. I think, every the only child like me should learn to make more friends.

Hope that we write more often.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：

根據(jù)題干內(nèi)容，你和筆友Jane之前互寄了全家的合影，Jane看了合影后來信問你為什么沒有兄弟姐妹。本文是寫給Jane的信件，說明中國的獨生子女的情況并表達看法。成文時應(yīng)注意以下幾點：(1) 內(nèi)容完整。(2)人稱使用要恰當。(3)時態(tài)：過去式為主。(4)適當使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章自然、流暢。(5)恰當使用一些高級詞匯和句型，以增加文章的檔次。根據(jù)題目的要求和我們上面提到的注意點，列出提綱：第一部分：直接引入話題；第二部分：說明原因，表達看法（中國的獨生子女的政策，以及自己對獨生子女的看法）；第三部分：表達希望（希望很快回信）。

【亮點說明】

1.使用高級句型：賓語從句的使用Now I am writing to tell you why I am the only child in my family.；as引導(dǎo)的定語從句As you know, the population of China is growing very fast.。2.使用了過渡詞語：as a result，On the other hand等。3.使用了重要短語：in order to 為了；put into practice實施；as a result結(jié)果；make friends交朋友。