Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

It is clear shown that many middle school students have physical and mental problems. 68% of the students surveying have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too. And a larger percentage lacks sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise. 42% of the students won’t obey our parents or teachers. Personally, I think we student should balance our physical exercise and studies. Without sound body, one can’t achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only on studies. As a result, I suggest we are given less homework or more time for out-of-classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life.

Answer 1

【答案】1. clear—clearly

2. surveying—surveyed

3. too 刪掉

4. lacks—lack

5. our—their

6. student—students

7. without 后加“a”

8. on---to

9. are—be

10. or---and

【解析】1．考查副詞。修飾過(guò)去分詞shown，應(yīng)該用副詞。故clear改為clearly。

2．考查過(guò)去分詞。句意：被調(diào)查的68%的學(xué)生有學(xué)習(xí)焦慮以及視力問(wèn)題。students和survey之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以用過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)。故surveying改為surveyed。

3．考查副詞。too"也"，根據(jù)句意"68%的學(xué)生有學(xué)習(xí)焦慮癥和差的視力"，不用too。故刪去too。

4．考查主謂一致。主語(yǔ)為 a larger percentage，應(yīng)該用單數(shù)謂語(yǔ)。故lack改為lacks。

5．考查代詞。根據(jù)句意"42%的學(xué)生不服從他們的父母和老師"，應(yīng)該用their。故our改為their。

6．考查同位語(yǔ)。student作了we的同位語(yǔ)，應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)。student改為students。

7．考查冠詞。加上a，根據(jù)句意"沒(méi)有一個(gè)健康的身體"，所以加上a。

8．考查介詞。pay attention to sth。故on改為to。

9．考查虛擬語(yǔ)氣。suggest后跟賓語(yǔ)從句，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用should+動(dòng)詞原形，should可以省略。故are改為be。

10．考查連詞。根據(jù)句意"我們應(yīng)該給與更少的作業(yè)和更多的時(shí)間"，所以用and。故or改為and。