【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加,刪除或修改.

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線( \)劃掉.

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.

注意: 1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.

My grandpa worked as a carpenter, who has devoted all his energy for carpentry for almost sixty years. Several years before, he began to make wooden models of farm tools. On National Day when I returned back and visited him with my parents, he showed me that he had created. He hopes he could expose people to the traditionally way of farming. Now every day, he prepares raw material in the yard, measures them, and polishes them. I’ve also picked up carpentry as hobby of mine. Now I am able to make a model by me. And I am determined to make it know to more.

【答案】第一處:worked→ works

第二處:energy后的for→ to

第三處:before→ ago

第四處:去掉back

第五處:that→ what

第六處:traditionally→ traditional

第七處:material→ materials

第八處:hobby前加a

第九處:me→ myself

第十處:know→ known

【解析】

本文是一篇記敘文,講述了作者的爺爺做了一輩子的木匠,幾年前,他開始制作農(nóng)具的木制模型,在爺爺?shù)挠绊懴,作者也愛上了木工活并開始制作模型。

第一處:考查時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致。句意:我爺爺是一個(gè)木匠,他做木匠已經(jīng)快60年了。陳述的是客觀事實(shí),用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),主語是My grandpa,謂語動(dòng)詞用第三人稱單數(shù),故 worked改為works。

第二處:考查固定短語。句意同上,devote to表示“致力于、把……奉獻(xiàn)給”,故energy后的for改為to。

第三處:考查beforeago的區(qū)別。句意:幾年前,他開始制作農(nóng)具的木制模型。ago用來描述事情發(fā)生之后的時(shí)間長度,常跟在時(shí)間名詞之后,故before改為ago。

第四處:考查return的用法。句意:國慶節(jié)那天,當(dāng)我回來和父母一起看望他時(shí),他向我展示了他的作品。return本身就表示“回來、返回”,后面不需再加back,語義重復(fù),故去掉back。

第五處:考查賓語從句。句意同上,分析句結(jié)構(gòu)可知此處為賓語從句,從句中的created缺少賓語,故that改為what。

第六處:考查形容詞。句意:他希望他能讓人們接觸到傳統(tǒng)的耕作方式。修飾名詞way用形容詞,故traditionally改為traditional。

第七處:考查名詞的數(shù)。句意:現(xiàn)在他每天都在院子里準(zhǔn)備原材料,測量并拋光。表示具體的材料時(shí),material是可數(shù)名詞,此處表示不止一種材料,應(yīng)該用可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式,故material改為materials

第八處:考查冠詞。句意:我也把木工作為自己的一個(gè)愛好(我也學(xué)會(huì)了做木工活)。hobby是發(fā)音以輔音音素開頭的可數(shù)名詞,此處泛指“一個(gè)愛好”,故hobby前加a

第九處:考查反身代詞。句意:現(xiàn)在我可以自己制作模型了。by oneself表示“獨(dú)自地”,故me改為myself。

第十處:考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。我決心讓更多的人知道它。此處為“make+賓語+賓補(bǔ)”結(jié)構(gòu),itknow之間是邏輯上的動(dòng)賓關(guān)系,表示被動(dòng),用過去分詞作賓補(bǔ),故know改為known。

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