Question

【題目】假定你是李華，請給你的外籍教師Mr. Smith寫封郵件，建議以“Humans and wild animals”為主題開展一些英語課堂活動。郵件內容包括：

1.你的建議；

2.建議的理由。

注意：

1.詞數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

I have a suggestion for you. How do you like the idea of bringing the topic “Humans and wild animals" to our English classes? I came up with the idea due to the phenomenon that many people are still hunting wild animals for food, which will seriously affect the balance of nature and lead to many deaths caused by a deadly virus from these animals. The classroom activities will help to develop our ability to communicate with people worldwide about the problem so that we can share the responsibility to protect wild animals and live in harmony with them.

I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生寫一封郵件給外籍教師Mr. Smith，建議他以“Humans and wild animals”為主題開展一些英語課堂活動。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)應為一般現在時

結構：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。

要求：1. 你的建議；

2. 建議的理由。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

come up with；due to；lead to；communicate with；share the responsibility；live in harmony with；take sth. into consideration

第三步：連詞成句

1. I came up with the idea due to the phenomenon that many people are still hunting wild animals for food, which will seriously affect the balance of nature and lead to many deaths caused by a deadly virus from these animals.

2. The classroom activities will help to develop our ability to communicate with people worldwide about the problem so that we can share the responsibility to protect wild animals and live in harmony with them.

3. I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration.

(根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。）

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結構順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表轉折對比關系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表換一種方式表達：In other words, that is to say,

6.表進行舉例說明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表陳述事實：In fact, frankly speaking

8.表選擇：either…or…，or

連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改