Question

【題目】假如你是高二學(xué)生李華，這次考試后，學(xué)校放假三天，你打算和同學(xué)出去旅游以調(diào)節(jié)身心，可是父母親不同意，擔(dān)心你的安全及學(xué)習(xí)。為此你與父母吵架，心情不好，不知如何說服父母。請(qǐng)用英語給你的外教Jimmy寫信，向他咨詢?nèi)绾巫屇愀改竿�意你的�?jì)劃。
注意：
1）可以適當(dāng)增添細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
2）詞數(shù)100左右。 開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。
參考詞匯：the Dragon Boat Festival 端午節(jié)
Dear Jimmy,
How is everything with you?
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jimmy,
How is everything with you?
I am writing the letter to ask for your advice.
I am taking an important test now. After that, there happens to be a three days off for the Dragon Boat Festival, you know, a traditional one in China . I have been planning to go traveling with my classmates to adjust myself mentally and physically after the tiring test. However, my parents oppose my plan strongly, saying not only is it unsafe but it may affect my learning as well. Therefore, I quarreled with them once and again, feeling upset. Honestly speaking, I am dying for this traveling but what shall I do? You are good at communicating with others. Would you give me some tips on how to get my parents' support?
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
【解析】試題為應(yīng)用文中的書信寫作，試題只給出寫作框架，并未給出所有的具體寫作細(xì)節(jié)，為半開放性寫作。寫好此文，需注意三點(diǎn)：一是寫信格式要準(zhǔn)確，信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，但切要寫好信的結(jié)尾。二是要詳略得當(dāng)，本文應(yīng)重點(diǎn)寫的是向外教Jimmy咨詢?nèi)绾巫屇愀改竿�意你的�?jì)劃。三要注意適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。另外，在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用。