Question

【題目】用英語寫一篇100詞左右的文章介紹我國首位航天員楊利偉。

姓名：楊利偉

出生年月：1965年6月

籍貫：遼寧省綏中縣

簡歷：1983年6月參軍

1992年調(diào)到成都空軍某部

1996年8月1500名飛行員參加體檢，楊利偉進入14人之列

1998年1月正式成為我國首批航天員，經(jīng)過5年訓(xùn)練光榮地選為我國首次載人航天飛行首飛隊成員

2003年10月15日乘“神州5號”飛船遨游太空

出生于農(nóng)民家庭，從兒時起向往藍天，在部隊聰明好學(xué)，訓(xùn)練刻苦。

參考詞匯：astronaut 宇航員 manned-space aircraft 載人航天飛機 research 研究 candidate 候選人

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Answer 1

【答案】The Pride of China

Yang Liwei was born in a farmer’s family in Suizhong County, Liaoning Privince in June, 1965.

When he was a child, he dreamed of flying in the blue sky. He joined the army in June, 1983. Nine years later he went to work in air force in Chengdu. In August 1996 he was chosen to be one of the 14 astronaut candidates from 1500 pilots through the physical examination.

He was a wise soldier and worked hard in the army. He became the first astronaut of our country in 1998 and was chosen to be one of the first manned space aircraft astronauts. On October 15, 2003 he successfully flew to space and carried out some research work.

He is the honor of our motherland and will be remembered forever by Chinese people. We should learn from him.

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于說明文，要求考生一篇100詞左右的文章介紹我國首位航天員楊利偉。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 表明寫作的對象。

2. 具體內(nèi)容：

1）姓名：楊利偉

2）出生年月：1965年6月

3）籍貫：遼寧省綏中縣

4）簡歷：1983年6月參軍

5）1992年調(diào)到成都空軍某部

6）1996年8月1500名飛行員參加體檢，楊利偉進入14人之列

7）1998年1月正式成為我國首批航天員，經(jīng)過5年訓(xùn)練光榮地選為我國首次載人航天飛行首飛隊成員

8）2003年10月15日乘“神州5號”飛船遨游太空

9）出生于農(nóng)民家庭，從兒時起向往藍天，在部隊聰明好學(xué)，訓(xùn)練刻苦。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

dream of ；one of；carry out；the honor of；learn from

第三步：連詞成句

1. Yang Liwei was born in a farmer’s family in Suizhong County, Liaoning Privince in June, 1965.

2. When he was a child, he dreamed of flying in the blue sky.

3. He joined the army in June, 1983.

4. Nine years later he went to work in air force in Chengdu.

5. In August 1996 he was chosen to be one of the 14 astronaut candidates from 1500 pilots through the physical examination.

6. He was a wise soldier and worked hard in the army.

7. He became the first astronaut of our country in 1998 and was chosen to be one of the first manned space aircraft astronauts.

8. On October 15, 2003 he successfully flew to space and carried out some research work.

9. He is the honor of our motherland and will be remembered forever by Chinese people.

10. We should learn from him.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改