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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文，文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Lang Ping, the head coach of China’s national women’s volleyball team, arrived at my high school in Sep 17. At about 9 o’clock, all the Senior 3 student gathered in the school stadium, waiting for the arrival of Lang Ping and her team. The moment Lang stepped into the stadium, nobody could stay seating. We clapped wild as we saw the schoolmaster take Lang to his seat. Them Lang shares her life with us in her speech. She said it was faith and courage had led her to her success.

As the Senior 3 student, I think it was not only a fortunate experience for me, but also a powerful one, as Lang’s words gave me strength. I will keep it in mind what she told us: Trusting yourself and fight every step of the way to win!

Answer 1

【答案】1. in Sep.17改為on Sep.17

2.student改為 students

3. seating改為seated

4.wild改為wildly

5.his 改為her

6.shares改為shared

7.courage后加that

8 . As后the改為a

9.去掉it

10.trusting改為trust

【解析】本文介紹了郎平去作者學(xué)校作演講的情況以及郎平的話對作者的啟發(fā)。

考查固定用法。表示“某月某日”，用on，所以in Sep.17改為on Sep.17。

考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。表示“所有的高三學(xué)生”，是一個復(fù)數(shù)概念，所以student改為 students。

考查固定用法。Stay seated意思是保持坐著的狀態(tài)，所以seating改為seated。

考查副詞。修飾動詞clapped，用副詞形式，所以填wild改為wildly。

考查代詞。郎平是女的，所以his 改為her。

考查時態(tài)。發(fā)生在過去的事情，用一般過去時，所以shares改為shared。

考查強調(diào)句。這里含有一個強調(diào)句，所以courage后加that。

考查冠詞。句意“作為一名高三的學(xué)生”，泛指“一名高三的學(xué)生”，所以As后the改為a。

考查固定用法。keep in mind是固定用法，意思是記住，所以去掉it。

考查祈使句。這是一個祈使句，祈使句用動詞原形，所以trusting改為trust。