Question

14．閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150個(gè)詞左右的英語短文．
Never Put off until Tomorrow What You Can Do Today
We have been told never to put off until tomorrow what you can do today since childhood．However，there are still many people who like putting off the things that they should do today until tomorrow．They have no plans for their work and their time．As a result，they will not accomplish their goals in the end．
For example，one Sunday I felt so tired after having a football match that I did not finish my homework even at night．I thought I could get up earlier to go to school the next morning so that I could finish my homework before class．But the next morning，I was not able to get to school in time because of the traffic jam．I was punished by the teacher．It taught me a lesson．From then on I made a determination that I would never put off anything important until the next day．
Please remember：Work today，for you don't know how much you may be hindered tomorrow．Seize the present day，cherish every minute you have now and trust the tomorrow as little as possible．
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1）以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
2）以約120詞對(duì)"今日事今日畢"展開議論，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）你讀了本篇文章后，有什么感想；
（2）談?wù)勀銓?duì)"今日事今日畢"的看法；
（3）你平時(shí)是怎樣合理安排時(shí)間，及時(shí)完成老師布置的任務(wù)的．
[寫作要求]
1）在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2）作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱用第一和第三人稱． 重要短語：try to do （努力做某事），put off（推遲），be in a mess（混亂），shelf one's tasks （擱置某人的任務(wù)），face sth （面對(duì)某事），lengthen life （延長(zhǎng)生命），from one's point of view（某人認(rèn)為），be of great benefit（對(duì)…有利），develop a good habit of（培養(yǎng)一個(gè)好習(xí)慣），cherish time（珍重時(shí)間），be bound to do sth（一定會(huì)做某事），make a difference（產(chǎn)生影響），pay off（獲得成功），make full use of（充分利用），keep a balance between A and B（保持A與B平衡）．
【高分句型一】
1．Many times，I shelved my tasks and went to bed without finishing them，just finding excuses for myself．
此處是現(xiàn)在分詞短語"finding excuses for myself"作伴隨狀語，主句為"I shelved my tasks and went to bed without finishing them"，主句的主語為"I"與動(dòng)詞"find"構(gòu)成邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系．
【高分句型二】
1．I believe that it's of great benefit for us to develop a good habit of cherishing time，from which we can make a sufficient preparation for tomorrow．
此處是由"介詞+關(guān)系代詞"構(gòu)成的非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系代詞"which"指代前面主句中的"a good habit"．
【高分句型三】
3．Only by finishing what we should do today can we better master our study and life for tomorrow!
此處是部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，結(jié)構(gòu)為"Only+【狀語成分：介詞短語/when、if引導(dǎo)的從句/時(shí)間副詞】+一般疑問句形式"．

解答 The author tries to tell us with his example that we should never put off until tomorrow what you can do today，as you never know what would happen tomorrow．（概括）
As the saying goes，"Time and tide wait for no man．"If you put off what you should do today，your tomorrow would be in a mess．What a shame it is to think of myself in the past!Many times，I put things until tomorrow．Many times，I shelved my tasks and went to bed without finishing them，just finding excuses for myself．【高分句型一】And now，time flies．I have to face the examination!（感想）
To save time is to lengthen life．From my point of view，I believe that it's of great benefit for us to develop a good habit of cherishing time，from which we can make a sufficient preparation for tomorrow．【高分句型二】Such a good habit will be bound to give us more confidence to make greater difference in the future．（對(duì)"今日事今日畢"的看法）
We always have time enough，if we will but use it aright．With the help of my teacher，I made a plan almost every day for my study，and even asked my best friend to supervise me．Now my perseverance pays off：gradually I can make full use of my time and keep a good balance between study and rest．Only by finishing what we should do today can we better master our study and life for tomorrow!【高分句型三】（怎樣合理安排時(shí)間，及時(shí)完成老師布置的任務(wù)的）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．