Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Thank you for your letter. Due to the fact that I am on business in another city, I couldn’t reply your letter directly after I received it. Now I am writing to tell you that my city has done to reduce traffic jams in the last few years.

First of all, four subways and some expressways has been built in my city to ease the heavy traffic. Second, it is public transportation which makes it convenient for people to take buses. Third, the parking fee is raised in the downtown, it helps to reduce the number of cars come in and out.

Now there are more buses and few cars in my city. The traffic is flowing smooth during the rush hour. Can you tell me something about the traffic in your city? Expecting for your reply!

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】am→was

【2】reply后加to

【3】that→what

【4】been前的has→have

【5】which→that

【6】it→which

【7】come→coming

【8】few→fewer

【9】smooth→smoothly

【10】去掉for

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】am→was 考查時態(tài)。由于我在另一個城市出差。這里根據(jù)下文可知，出差是在過去，故am改為was。

【2】reply后加to 句意：我不能收到信后直接回復。reply to回復，回答。

【3】that→what 考查賓語從句引導詞。句意：現(xiàn)在我寫信告訴你我的城市在過去的幾年做了什么事來減少交通堵塞。根據(jù)句意應用引導詞what引導賓語從句并在句中作賓語，故that改為what。

【4】been前的has→have 考查主謂一致。這里主語是four subways and some expressways，故用have。故has改為have。

【5】which→that 考查強調(diào)句型。句意：第二，公共交通使得坐公交車很方便。這里是強調(diào)句型，強調(diào)主語public transportation，故which改為that。

【6】it→-which 考查非限制性定語從句，句意：第三，市區(qū)的停車費增加，這有助于減少進出市區(qū)的汽車數(shù)量。這里構(gòu)造非限制性定語從句，用-which指代上句。故it→-which。

【7】come→coming 考查現(xiàn)在分詞作定語。cars coming in and out進出的汽車。根據(jù)與cars是主動關系，故應用coming作定語，句中已經(jīng)有謂語動詞helps。

【8】few→fewer 考查比較級。句意：現(xiàn)在在我的城市有更多的公交車，更少的汽車。這里more buses和fewer cars對應，故few改為fewer。

【9】smooth→smoothly 考查副詞。句意：交通高峰時交通順暢。用副詞修飾動詞，故smooth改為smoothly。

【10】去掉for 句意：期待你的回復。這里expect（期待）是及物動詞，不需要加介詞，故去掉for。