假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2. 只允許修改 10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分

When I was at middle school, I have a nice classmate, that was the first foreigner I had ever met. She was friendly and very pretty. She was good in three languages, although he was born in China. It was interested that her father was a Frenchman while her mother came from England. All of them were teaching at a university at that time. She was crazy collecting stamps, listening to pop music, as well as playing the football. Her dream was to be an engineer, so she usually studied harder to achieve it. She often told funny stories in English to make us laughing. We all liked her.

 

【答案】

 

 have改為had

 that改為who

 at改為at

 he改為she

 interested改為interested

 All改為both

  crazy后加about

 去the

 harder改為hard

 laughing改為laugh

【解析】

 have改為had        考查動詞的時態(tài)。句意當(dāng)我在中學(xué)時,我有一個很好的同學(xué)。指的是過去,故用一般過去時。

 that改為who        考查定語從句。我有一個同學(xué),他是我遇到的第一位外國人。先行詞是classmate,因?yàn)槭欠窍拗菩远ㄕZ從句,故只能用who來引導(dǎo)。

 at改為at            考查固定短語。Be good at 擅長。

 he改為she           考查人稱代詞。句意 她擅長三國語言,盡管她出生在中國。上句話中出現(xiàn)的是she,故前后保持一致。

 interested改為 interested考查形容詞 句意 他的父親是法國人而他的母親是英國人,這件事是非常有趣的,it 是代指這件事,故用interesting來修飾。

 All改為both           考查代詞。句意 她的父母在大學(xué)教書。她的父母兩者 故用both.

  crazy后加about        考查固定短語。Be crazy about 對。。瘋狂。

 去the                  考查冠詞。球類前面不加冠詞。

 harder改為hard         考查形容詞。句意 她的夢想是工程師,所以她努力學(xué)習(xí)去實(shí)現(xiàn)。沒有比較級故去掉。

 laughing改為laugh      考查固定短語。Make sb do 讓某人做某事,故用動詞原形。

考點(diǎn)   短文改錯。

 

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