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11．In China，people who refuse to allow their houses to be pulled down by developers（開發(fā)商） are called"nail households"（釘子戶）．A number of them have attracted widespread attention in the press．In one famous case in Chongqing in 2007，a family later nicknamed"the coolest nail household"，refused to move out of their house that they had lived for three generations．Though developers cut their power and water，and dug a 10-metre deep pit around the house，the owner still lived in it．When a local court ruled that the house should be knocked down，the angry owner flew a national flag on the top of his house with a slogan of"the government respects and preserves human rights".85% net users surveyed on Sina．com at that time supported the family rather than the developers．Experts believed the conflict between the two parties reflected a growing dissatisfaction among common people．
Finally"the coolest nail household"reached an agreement with the developers after two years'negotiation（協(xié)商）．However，the problem hasn't been done yet with lots of other incidents of"nail households"exposed to the public，and the discussion still goes on．
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1以約30個(gè)詞概括以上短文內(nèi)容；
2然后以約120個(gè)詞就"如何解決發(fā)展商與釘子戶之間矛盾"的主題發(fā)表你的看法，并包括以下要點(diǎn)：
（1）你是如何看待釘子戶現(xiàn)象；
（2）如何解決發(fā)展商與釘子戶之間的矛盾；
（3）解決兩者矛盾有何意義．
【寫作要求】
1作文中可以使用實(shí)例來支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容論述，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照"三段式"模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由或列舉事例．第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．
時(shí)態(tài)一般用一般過去時(shí)或一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱一般用第三人稱．
重要短語：receive considerable concerns（獲得很大關(guān)注），the press （新聞界/媒體），highlight a conflict （使矛盾突出），take an attitude towards（對…采取一個(gè)態(tài)度），fight against （與…作斗爭），confront with （使面臨），deal with （處理），be supposed to do （應(yīng)該做某事…），be subject to （服從），makes sense （有意義，有道理），keep sb from doing（阻止某人做某事），carry out （實(shí)施），beyond doubt （毫無疑問），build up a harmonious society （構(gòu)建一個(gè)和諧社會）．
【高分句型】
1．The Chongqing incident about"nail households"which have received considerable concerns in the press，highlights an increasing conflict between common people and developers．
這里是由which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，現(xiàn)行詞是the Chongqing incident about"nail households"，which在定語從句中作主語．整個(gè)句子的謂語動詞是highlight，主語為the Chongqing incident about"nail households"，賓語為an increasing conflict between common people and developers．
2．the reason why the nail households fight against developers is that the public interests sometimes confront with private properties．
這里是固定句型"The reason why…is that…"，在整個(gè)句子中is為謂語動詞，主語為the reason，why引導(dǎo)的是定語從句，先行詞為the reason，why在從句中作原因狀語，that引導(dǎo)的從句作表語．

解答 The Chongqing incident about"nail households"which have receivedconsiderable concerns in the press，highlights an increasing conflict between common people anddevelopers．【高分句型】Most people take a sympatheticattitude towards those"nail households"． （概括）
The conflict between"nail households"and developers has been broughtinto focus．From my perspective，the reason why the nail households fight against developersis that the public interests sometimes confront with private properties．【高分句型】If this issue isn't dealt with properly，the goal of harmonioussociety can't be achieved．（看待釘子戶的觀點(diǎn)）
Therefore，drastic measures should be taken to undo this problem．
First of all，developers are supposed to contact with the owners of thehouses which are subject to demolishment． It makes sense if developers visit one home after another to settlewith the payment．To hammer down their house only with a piece of notice could onlyupgrade the conflict．In addition，the local government is responsible to the personal safety of the weakpart，keeping them from being attacked，and making sure that the negotiation is carried out inpeaceful and willing way．【高分句型】In brief，there is still a lot to doto help solve the problem．（解決方法）
It's beyond doubt that the incidents of"nail households"have brought alarge quantity of unfavorable consequences on building up a harmonious society．Welfare of one family can mirrorthe progress of a society．Only by lessening the confrontation of nail households can welive together happily．【高分句型】（意義）

點(diǎn)評 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．