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【題目】為了幫助中學生健康成長,我校英文報開設了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假如你是該欄目的編輯李華,收到一封署名為Jamie的求助信。信中Jamie向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣,使正常的學習和生活受到了影響。請用英文給他寫一封回信。

內容要點如下：1.表示理解并給予安慰；2.提出建議并說明理由。

注意：1.詞數100左右； 2.信中不能出現與本人相關的信息； 3.信的開頭與結尾已擬好,不計入總詞數。

參考詞匯：temper n.脾氣,情緒

Dear Jamie,

I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】普通范文

Dear Jamie,

I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.①Everyone may have such bad times, so don't worry too much about it. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything bad.②Here are three useful tips:

First of all,③talk to others about your problems.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting people or yourself. Second,④go out and play games with your friends. It can help you relax.Third,⑤always believe that good things will happen in the future.⑥In this way, you may stay happy and be full of energy most of the time.

⑦I hope you will feel better soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

高級范文

Dear Jamie,

I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.①Everyone has their ups and downs, so when things go wrong, don't feel too bad.You should learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything bad.②I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.

First,③don't keep things to yourself; try to share your problems with others,which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting people or yourself. Second,④go outdoors and play team games with your friends, which is an effective way to get rid of anger.Third,⑤remain optimistic about your future.⑥Such a positive attitude can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

⑦I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一封針對求助信寫的回信。寫作時，要寫清要點，包括：1.表示理解并給予安慰；2.提出建議并說明理由，要用一般現在時態(tài)，以第一人稱來表述．

重點短語和句型：

Everyone has their ups and downs, so when things go wrong, don't feel too bad.使用ups and downs代替bad times更加生動形象。

I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.更具建議性。

First, ③don't keep things to yourself; try to share your problems with others, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting people or yourself. Share something with somebody與某人分享某事。

Second, ④go outdoors and play team games with your friends, which is an effective way to get rid of anger. 使用which引導定語從句。

Third, ⑤remain optimistic about your future. ⑥Such a positive attitude can be helpful in lifting your spirits. remain optimistic about對…保持樂觀。

使用first，second，third體現條理性。

⑦I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. Feel calmer比feel better更好。