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【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I left home at 17 and pay my own way through college.In the past 20 years,I have worked for everything I needed.So it shocks me what some people in their 20s,still get their life supported by our parents.Some of these parents have difficult supporting their families.

It's true that the job market is much more harder these days.Therefore,there are certainly some ways to make living on our own.Even if our parents is nice enough to pay for our college,we shouldn't burden them with our problems.We should be financial responsible adults,made our parents proud of us.

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【答案】I left home at 17 and pay my own way through college.In the past 20 years,I have worked for everything I

paid

needed.So it shocks me what some people in their 20s,still get their life supported by our parents.Some of these

that their

parents have difficult supporting their families.

difficulty

It's true that the job market is much more harder these days.Therefore,there are certainly some ways to make∧

去掉more However a

living on our own.Even if our parents is nice enough to pay for our college,we shouldn't burden them with our

are

problems.We should be financial responsible adults,made our parents proud of us.

financially making

【解析】作者以自己的經(jīng)歷鼓勵(lì)年輕人要自食其力，不要過(guò)分依靠父母。

考查時(shí)態(tài)。發(fā)生在過(guò)去的事情，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，所以pay改成paid。

考查固定句型。it shocks me that讓我震驚的是……，是固定句型，所以what改成that。

考查代詞。讓我震驚的是，有些人已經(jīng)20多歲了，但是仍然由他們的父母養(yǎng)活他們。所以our改成their。

考查固定句型。have difficulty (in) doing sth. 做某事有困難，是固定句型，所以difficult改成difficulty。

考查固定用法。much直接修飾比較級(jí)，所以去掉more。

考查語(yǔ)義理解。然而，有許多可以靠我們自己謀生的方法。所以Therefore改成However。

考查固定短語(yǔ)。make a living謀生，是固定短語(yǔ)，所以living前加a。

考查主謂一致。主語(yǔ)our parents是復(fù)數(shù)，所以is改成 are。

考查副詞。修飾形容詞responsible，用副詞，所以financial改成 financially。

考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。make與其邏輯主語(yǔ)We之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以用現(xiàn)在分詞，made改成making。