Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你校學(xué)生會打算組織一次有機(jī)蔬菜采摘活動，你的好友 Tom --- 一名交換生聽說此事，也想?yún)⒓�。他來信想了解這次活動的具體細(xì)節(jié)。請給他寫封回信。要點如下：

1. 具體時間及地點（本周日上午8:00，紅昌農(nóng)場）；

2. 活動目的（了解有機(jī)蔬菜，體驗采摘樂趣）；

3. 活動內(nèi)容：在專人引導(dǎo)下對農(nóng)場進(jìn)行參觀，探究有機(jī)蔬菜的種植；采摘有機(jī)蔬菜（黃瓜、西紅柿等）；親自烹飪自己摘到的蔬菜。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：有機(jī)蔬菜 organic vegetables 黃瓜 cucumber

Dear Tom,

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Looking forward to your reply.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in the organic vegetables picking activity. I’m going to tell you something in details to you, which you must keep in mind.

Above all, it will be held at 8:00 am this Sunday. It is on Hongchang Farm that this activity will take place. In the activity, there will be a guide who helps us pay a visit to the farm. Moreover, we’re going to gain the opportunity to experience the planting process. After that, we can pick some organic vegetables, such as tomatoes, cucumbers and so on. Besides, we will cook the vegetables on our own, which, I think, is the most exciting part.

That’s all I want to say. If you want to know more, just let me know. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求以李華的身份給交換生Tom回信關(guān)于有機(jī)蔬菜采摘活動的具體細(xì)節(jié)。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文。

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法。

要求：

1. 具體時間及地點（本周日上午8:00，紅昌農(nóng)場）；

2. 活動目的（了解有機(jī)蔬菜，體驗采摘樂趣）；

3. 活動內(nèi)容：在專人引導(dǎo)下對農(nóng)場進(jìn)行參觀，探究有機(jī)蔬菜的種植；采摘有機(jī)蔬菜（黃瓜、西紅柿等）；親自烹飪自己摘到的蔬菜。

第二步：列提綱（重點短語）

in details ;gain the opportunity; such as

第三步：連詞成句

1.I’m going to tell you something in details to you, which you must keep in mind.

2.Moreover, we’re going to gain the opportunity to experience the planting process.

3.After that, we can pick some organic vegetables, such as tomatoes, cucumbers and so on.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇

1.表示文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：告知具體時間；說明活動目的；敘述活動內(nèi)容。

2.表示并列補充關(guān)系：Above all；Moreover；Besides

第五步：潤色修改