【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Sailor Gutzler was only survivor in a plane crash that killed her family in Eddyville, Kentucky in January 3, 2015. It was reported that the 7yearold girl has walked about a mile through the cold, dark wood, wearing a short-sleeve shirt, shorts and no shoes in the freezing wind. Bleeding and frightened, she was walking alone while she saw a light in the distance, it led her to Larry Wilkins' home. She was knocked on the door. Wilkins, 71, answered to find a thin, black-haired girl weeping and trembling. Eventual, with the assistance of the old man, she called the police for help. However, the brave girl helped the investigators locate the crashing plane in the right direction.

【答案】

【1】was后面加the

【2】in改為on

【3】has改為had

【4】wood改為woods

【5】while改為when

【6】it改為which

【7】去掉was

【8】Eventual改為Eventually

【9】However改為T(mén)herefore

【10】crashing改為crashed

【解析】

試題分析：

【1】was后面加the 名詞survivor前面有only修飾，only表示特指，所以使用定冠詞the。

【2】in改為on 英語(yǔ)中具體在某一天使用介詞on。

【3】has改為had 本句敘述的是2015年1月3號(hào)之前就發(fā)生的事情，所以使用過(guò)去完成時(shí)。

【4】wood改為woods 名詞woods指森林；黑色的森林穿著…的衣服，這是一種擬人的修辭手法。

【5】while改為when 時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句中的動(dòng)詞是saw，這是一個(gè)短暫性動(dòng)詞，不能和while連用。While要和延續(xù)性動(dòng)詞連用。When可以和延續(xù)性也可以和短暫性動(dòng)詞連用。

【6】it改為which 本句是一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which指代先行詞light在句中做主語(yǔ)，不能省略。It不能引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句。

【7】去掉was 動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)knock on敲擊；本句主語(yǔ)she和knock on之間構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以不需要使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。

【8】Eventual改為Eventually 形容詞eventual是不能在句中做狀語(yǔ)的，應(yīng)該使用副詞eventually在句中做狀語(yǔ)。

【9】However改為T(mén)herefore 根據(jù)句意可知上下文之間是因果關(guān)系，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。所以使用副詞therefore。

【10】crashing改為crashed 形容詞crashed是動(dòng)詞crash墜毀的過(guò)去分詞轉(zhuǎn)換而來(lái)，表示已經(jīng)完成的動(dòng)作，因?yàn)閏rash是不及物動(dòng)詞，所以它的過(guò)去分詞不表示被動(dòng)。本句是指已經(jīng)墜毀的飛機(jī)。

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