Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是李華，最近你從報紙上看到一家涉外酒店招聘暑期兼職工的廣告，請你根據(jù)下列要點提示寫一封應(yīng)聘信。

1.李華，女，18歲，身體健康。

2.擅長英語，口語流利。

3.性格外向，交際能力強。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右。

2.書信格式已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3.可以適當(dāng)拓展。

Dear Sir or Madame,

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madame,

I am writing in response to your advertisement in the newspaper. My name is Li Hua and I am 18 years old. I think I will be fit for the job as a waitress in your hotel this summer vacation. My advantages are as follows:

Firstly, I am healthy and strong. I can work for long hours in summer. Secondly, my English is excellent. I can speak English fluently and have no difficulty communicating with foreigners.

Finally, I am outgoing and good at communicating with others. As a result, I am popular among my classmates and teachers.

I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your hotel. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Wang Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇是提綱類寫作。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點說明】I am writing in response to your advertisement in the newspaper. 開頭表明自己的目的，一目了然；I think I will be fit for the job as a waitress in your hotel this summer vacation. 運用賓語從句；I can speak English fluently and have no difficulty communicating with foreigners.運用固定句式與高級詞組結(jié)合；同時運用連接詞，使文章連接自然，如Firstly首先，F(xiàn)inally最后等，I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your hotel. I’m looking forward to your reply.此句式為文章增色，顯得文章很有檔次。