【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下一畫橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

A discussion about hiking had been held in our class. Some students think that hiking during vacations can make people feel healthier, fresher or more harmonious with the nature. They find themselves deep attracted by the beauty of nature. They can also be relaxing by walking in deep mountains. But nowadays some hikers even begin to explore the places people have ever been to, and accidents have happened now and then because a poor knowledge of hiking. Some hikers even lost their life. The other students in our class think it not safe to organize so dangerous activities. They make suggestions what laws should be passed and hikers should be trained before they attend the activities.

【答案】

【1】had改為has

【2】or改為and

【3】刪除nature前面的the

【4】deep改為deeply

【5】relaxing改為relaxed

【6】ever改為never

【7】because后接of

【8】life改為lives

【9】so改為such

【10】what改為 that

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于說明文，主要介紹了遠(yuǎn)足這一項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)人身體的好處以及危險(xiǎn)，建議要通過立法來規(guī)范這一項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)。

【1】had改為has 考查時(shí)態(tài)。原文中使用了過去完成時(shí)，該時(shí)態(tài)表示“過去的過去”，但是本文使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主的時(shí)態(tài)，并沒有這種含義。在我們班級(jí)進(jìn)行了這樣的討論。

【2】or改為and 考查連詞。本句表示三個(gè)形容詞的并列，遠(yuǎn)足讓人們感覺更健康，更有活力和自然也更和諧。

【3】刪除nature前面的the 考查冠詞。名詞nature自然，這是一個(gè)抽象名詞，要單獨(dú)使用，不需要接冠詞。

【4】deep改為deeply 考查副詞。本句中使用副詞deeply表示抽象的程度很深，而deep表示的具體的深度；句意：他們發(fā)現(xiàn)自己被自然的美景深深地影響了。

【5】relaxing改為relaxed 考查形容詞。過去分詞轉(zhuǎn)換的形容詞relaxed通常修飾人或與人有關(guān)的事物，而relaxing通常修飾事物。句意：在深山中行走，他們感覺很放松。

【6】ever改為never 考查上下文串聯(lián)。句意：但是現(xiàn)在一些遠(yuǎn)足者甚至開始探索以前人們沒有去過的地方。

【7】because后接of 考查介詞短語。連詞because后面要接從句表示原因，而because of后面要接名詞或者名詞短語表示原因。本句中后面是名詞短語a poor knowledge of hiking.，所以使用介詞短語because of。

【8】life改為lives 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。當(dāng)名詞life表示生命的時(shí)候，是一個(gè)可數(shù)名詞；當(dāng)life表示生活的時(shí)候，是一個(gè)不可數(shù)名詞。本句中l(wèi)ife表示生命，前面有their修飾，說明使用復(fù)數(shù)形式。句意：一些遠(yuǎn)足者甚至失去了生命。

【9】so改為such 考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)。可以使用such修飾有形容詞修飾的名詞，so的后面通常套接形容詞或者副詞。本文中such dangerous activities意為“如此危險(xiǎn)的活動(dòng)”。

【10】what改為that 考查同位語從句。本句中that引導(dǎo)同位語從句，在句中不充當(dāng)任何成分，而what屬于名詞性從句的連接代詞，在名詞性從句要充當(dāng)主語、賓語或表語等成分，不能省略。

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