Question

1．假如你是中學生李平．最近你校規(guī)定：學生在校期間，禁止到校外就餐．現(xiàn)在，請你就此事給校報英文版編輯寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．學校制定此規(guī)定的理由；
2．同學們對此規(guī)定的反應及理由；
3．你的看法．
注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；信的開頭和結(jié)束語已寫好，不計入總次數(shù)；
      2．文中不得透露你和所在學校的真實名字；
      3．參考詞匯：食堂 canteen[C]
Dear editor，
Dear editor，
I'm writing to talk about our school's new rule that all students are forbidden to eat out during school days．（說明原因）
The school says，for one thing，the food outside the campus isn't healthy and its safety can't be guaranteed，and for another，if students have meals in the canteen，they may save money because the food there is cheaper．（高分句型一） However，some students are against the rule for two reasons．First，they dislike the food in the canteen because of its poor quality．In addition，the school seems to try to make more money if all students are forced to have every meal in school．（高分句型二）（闡述理由）
Personally，to make more students have meal inside the campus，the school should make the food taste nicer and offer them a larger variety of food，too．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Pin
Best wishes．
                                                             Yours，
                                                                     Li Ping．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
The school says，for one thing，the food outside the campus isn't healthy and its safety can't be guaranteed，and for another，if students have meals in the canteen，they may save money because the food there is cheaper．
高分句型二：
In addition，the school seems to try to make more money if all students are forced to have every meal in school．
句型一 ①if students have meals in the canteen 該句使用了if引導的條件狀語從句
            ②because the food there is cheaper．該句是一個由because 引導的原因狀語從句
            ③for one thing…for anther…固定短語 一方面…另一方面
句型二 ①the school seems to try to make more money 該句謂語部分使用了系動詞seem的用法：seem to do sth
           ②if all students are forced to have every meal…該句為if引導的條件狀語從句

解答 Dear editor，
   I'm writing to talk about our school's new rule that all students are forbidden to eat out during school days．（說明原因）
   The school says，for one thing，the food outside the campus isn't healthy and its safety can't be guaranteed，and for another，if students have meals in the canteen，they may save money because the food there is cheaper．（高分句型一）  However，some students are against the rule for two reasons．First，they dislike the food in the canteen because of its poor quality．In addition，the school seems to try to make more money if all students are forced to have every meal in school．（高分句型二）（闡述理由）
   Personally，to make more students have meal inside the campus，the school should make the food taste nicer and offer them a larger variety of food，too．
   Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Pin

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