2.英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文,文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處,錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(/\),并在該句下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:
(1)每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
(2)只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake.We took ours fishing poles and headed
for the lake.As soon as we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water.Before waiting
for about half an hour,I was beginning to get impatiently.I wanted to give up,and my
grandfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally,there were a sudden pull at the pole
and fish was caught.Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.
Felt hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.

分析 文章大意:我和爺爺喜歡釣魚.一個(gè)周日早晨我們到一個(gè)湖邊釣魚.在釣魚的過程中我顯得沒有耐心,我想放棄,但爺爺叫我再等等,終于,我釣到一條魚,隨后爺爺也釣了一條魚.

解答 My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.

One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake.We took ours fishing poles and headed
                                    went                                     our
for the lake.As soon as we arrived,so we dropped the lines into the water.Before waiting
                                                        去掉                                                    After
for about half an hour,I was beginning to get impatiently.I wanted to give up,and my
                                                                    impatient                                       but
grandfather told me to wait a little longer.Finally,there were a sudden pull at the pole
                                                                                      was
and∧fish was caught.Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.
                                                                  minutes
Felt hungry,we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish.It was delicious.
Feeling
76.go-went      考查時(shí)態(tài).根據(jù)文意周日早晨釣魚是發(fā)生過的事情所以應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí).
77.ours-our     考查名詞性物主代詞和形容詞性物主代詞的用法.名詞性物主代詞ours 不能再與名詞連用,而后面的fishing poles是名詞,修飾名詞與名詞連用用形容詞性物主代詞our.              
78.去掉we前面的so   考查從屬連詞. 上文有as soon as 引導(dǎo)從句,則后一句話為主句不用引導(dǎo)詞.連詞多用.
79.before--after       考查介詞.介詞 before和after錯(cuò)誤.根據(jù)句意應(yīng)該是等了大約半小時(shí)之后而不是之前.
80.impatiently-impatient  考查副詞與形容詞區(qū)別.系表結(jié)構(gòu)的表語一般用形容詞而不能用副詞做表語.get為系動(dòng)詞后面要用形容詞 impatient做表語.  
81.a(chǎn)nd-but              考查并列連詞. 上句話是想放棄與下文的爺爺讓我再等等之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系而不是順接,所以and改成but.
82.were-was           考查主謂一致.There be  句型是就近一致原則,離be動(dòng)詞近的是a sudden poll 為單數(shù),所以be動(dòng)詞用 was 而不用were.        
83.fish前加a          考查冠詞.這里的fish是一條魚是可數(shù)名詞,可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)前要加冠詞a.fish 單復(fù)數(shù)同形,但是可數(shù)名詞需加冠詞.下文的"caught a fish"有提示.              
84.minute-minutes 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù).根據(jù)句意接下來的幾分鐘,minute是可數(shù)名詞好幾分鐘要用復(fù)數(shù)形式.
85.felt-feeling       考查非謂語動(dòng)詞.非謂語動(dòng)詞feel的邏輯主語是we(我們)是主動(dòng)感覺,所以非謂語用現(xiàn)在分詞feeling表示主動(dòng)含義.根據(jù)句意應(yīng)該是等了大約半小時(shí)之后而不是之前.

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇短文改錯(cuò)考查涉及冠詞,非謂語動(dòng)詞,主謂一致,名詞單復(fù)數(shù),時(shí)態(tài)等,平時(shí)注重多積累,答題時(shí)結(jié)合句意和語法進(jìn)行分析,答完后通讀,是否通順,符合邏輯.

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