【題目】The 18yearold girl from Linyi,Shandong Province scored 568 points on her college entrance exam this year and was admitted to Nanjing University of Posts and Telecommunications.

On Aug.19,Xu received a phone call from an unknown person telling her that she was due to receive student funding.Following the call,Xu transferred a 9,900yuan “activation fee” into the man’s bank account,hoping the money would appear in her student account,but it never did.

After discovering they had been cheated,the family immediately reported the incident to the police,but Xu was said to be frustrated.On their way home,she suddenly fainted and despite doctors’ best efforts to rescue her,she passed away.

The death of Xu Yuyu immediately caused an outcry over the society,and once again,it fired a public anger towards those who commit heartless fraud(欺詐).

So how was Xu’s private information leaked out?

Reporters have discovered that there are many people who openly sell the examinee’s information online.The information includes the examinee’s name,school,phone number,and address.The personal information of examinee has become the target of the online fraud industry.

寫作內(nèi)容

1.用約30個(gè)單詞寫出上文概要;

2.用約120個(gè)詞就“Personal information leakage”談?wù)勀愕目捶ê透惺,?nèi)容包括:

(1)簡述個(gè)人信息泄露的危害及保護(hù)個(gè)人信息的重要性;

(2)就如何保護(hù)個(gè)人信息提幾點(diǎn)建議(至少兩點(diǎn))。

寫作要求

1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句;

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;

3.不必寫標(biāo)題。

評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

內(nèi)容完整,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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【答案】A girl from Shandong,who would soon begin her university life,was cheated out of 9,900 yuan due to personal information leakage.The heavy blow claimed her life,which aroused anger in society.

The leakage of personal information is of great harm.Not only will people be frequently troubled by unwanted short messages or calls,but also people may be cheated out of money or be put in danger.Thus,the protection of personal information is of vital importance in order for common people to maintain a peaceful and safe life,as well as to protect one’s own fortune.

Here are the tips on how to protect one’s personal information.Never click any link on phones or computers unless it can be utterly trusted.Also,avoid connecting smart phones to any untrusted WiFi in public places.Apart from the efforts of common people,the government must spare no effort to fight against criminals selling others’ personal information.

【解析】試題分析:根據(jù)所給文章用約30個(gè)單詞寫出文章概要,并用約120個(gè)詞就“Personal information leakage”談?wù)勀愕目捶ê透惺堋?/span>首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示,認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系,然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱,列出要點(diǎn),并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力,靈活運(yùn)用英語知識,采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來。寫作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用,主次分明,詳略得當(dāng),語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展,按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫?忌仨氄J(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫、錯(cuò)寫情況,有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一篇提綱式作文,采用三段式,內(nèi)容符合要求,結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理,使用高級句子。A girl from Shandong,who would soon begin her university lifewas cheated out of 9,900 yuan due to personal information leakage.who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句和被動(dòng)語態(tài)在句中結(jié)合;Not only will people be frequently troubled by unwanted short messages or callsbut also people may be cheated out of money or be put in danger.部分倒裝使用巧妙;Never click any link on phones or computers unless it can be utterly trusted unless引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句;另外,Thus,as well as,Also,等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。

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