【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除:把多余的詞用(\)劃掉。
修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意:1).每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2).只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。
Last summer vacation I did some fruit-picking. It was an interesting but pretty hard work. I had to start at 7 am and pick eight hours. But it was such cheerful and full of funny. Some of we had guitars, so in the evenings we had barbecues and play a bit of music together. I only got about $80 a week, but at least they gave me all my meal, and the food was not that awfully. Basic accommodation was also supplying. However, I'm afraid I won't be going fruit-picking this summer, because I've got a temporary job in town what pays better.

【答案】①an去掉; ②添加for; ③such→so; ④funny→fun ; ⑤we→us; ⑥play→played ; ⑦meal→meals; ⑧awfully→awful ; ⑨supplying→supplied ; ⑩what→that/which

【解析】本文是一篇記敘文,講述暑假作者打工幫助摘水果的經(jīng)歷。

① 考查形容詞。interesting作表語,不能加an,故要去掉。

② 考查介詞。句意:我不得不在早上7點出發(fā),連續(xù)八個小時。for+一段時間,表持續(xù)多長時間。故添加for .

③ 考查固定句型。句意:但它是如此快樂,充滿了樂趣。such+冠詞+形容詞+名詞 ,而so+形容詞 。而cheerful為形容詞,所以要把such改為so。

④ 考查名詞。funny是形容詞不能作full of的賓語,要用名詞fun。故要把funny改為fun。

⑤考查代詞。we 是主格,要作Some of的賓主人,賓語要用賓格,we的賓格是us,故把we 改為 us。

⑥考查動詞。根據(jù) we had barbecues and play a bit of music together.,根據(jù)本章可知是描述過去的經(jīng)歷,可知謂語動詞要用一般過去時,故要把play 改為played。
⑦考查名詞。我每周只有80美元左右,但至少他們提供了我所有的飯菜。從句意可知是all the meals,要用復數(shù)。故把meal改為meals 。

⑧考查形容詞。句意; 食物不是那么糟糕,awfully為副詞,不能作表語,故改為形容詞awful。

⑨考查語態(tài)。句意:也提供了基本住宿。根據(jù)句意分析,accommodation與supply是被動關系,故supplying 改為supplied。

⑩考查定語從句。句意:因為我在鎮(zhèn)上有一份臨時工作,它的薪水更高。 a temporary job 是定語從句的先行詞,工作是物,在從句中作主語,可用that/which。而what 引導名詞從句。不能引導定語從句,故要把what 改為that/which。

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