Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

For a long time I had been longed for a piano of my own to practice on. There was a piano shop on the street through that I went to the school every day. Whenever I passed the shop, look at the piano which stood in the corner of the shop window. What desperately I had been dreaming day and night to possess a piano like that. Unfortunate, my father was just a clerk, but he could not afford to buy me an expensive piano, though he knew that I was very anxious for one. In my birthday, I went as usual to the shop window to look at the piano, but to my surprised the piano had gone. In fact, I should not have been surprised, other had the right to buy it, if they could afford to. Tears filled my eyes when I thought of being able to see that piano any more.

Answer 1

【答案】1. longed→longing

2.that→which

3.去掉the

4.look→looking

5.What→How

6. Unfortunate→Unfortunately

7.In→On

8. surprised→surprise

9. other→others

10.of后添加not

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。記敘了作者在上學(xué)路上的鋼琴店里看到一架鋼琴，日夜渴望擁有，但是家庭無法承擔一架昂貴的鋼琴。直到后來鋼琴被買走，作者再也見不到那架鋼琴了。

1.考查動詞時態(tài)。動詞短語long for表示“渴望……”，主語I與long for是主動關(guān)系，且根據(jù)上文I had been可知為過去完成進行時的主動時，故longed改為longing。

2.考查定語從句。本句為“介詞+關(guān)系代詞”結(jié)構(gòu)定語從句修飾先行詞street，由于介詞提前，故關(guān)系代詞只能用which不能用that。故that改為which。

3.考查冠詞。根據(jù)短語go to school表示“去上學(xué)”。故去掉the。

4.考查非謂語動詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知look在句中做非謂語動詞，與邏輯主語I構(gòu)成主動關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語。故look改為looking。

5.考查連詞。句意：我曾日夜夢想擁有一架那樣的鋼琴。此處修飾副詞desperately，表示“多么，非�！睉�(yīng)用how。故What改為How。

6.考查副詞。此處要用副詞放在句首作狀語，故Unfortunate改為Unfortunately。

7.考查介詞。具體日子之前用介詞on。故In改為On。

8.考查名詞。短語to one’s surprise表示“某人驚訝的是”。故surprised改為surprise。

9.考查代詞。句意：事實上，我不應(yīng)該感到驚訝，別人有權(quán)利買它，如果他們能買得起的話。此處表示“別人”且做主語應(yīng)用others。故other改為others。

10.考查句意理解。句意：一想到再也看不到那架鋼琴，我就熱淚盈眶。根據(jù)對文意的理解，可知此處要加一個表示否定意義的詞not。故of后添加not。