Question

【題目】假如你是李明，你的學校里來了一位英國交換生保羅。他在和你的交談中表示在中國學習壓力很大。請你給他寫封信，提些建議。(100 words or so)

【寫作內(nèi)容】將自己的問題告訴老師和同學，請求得到他們的幫助；不要總想著考試成績，多想想自己在哪些方面進步了，這樣就會給自己自信；多做運動，運動可以幫助自己緩解壓力（relieve one’s stress），并且有助睡眠。

Paul,

I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.

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Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Paul, I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from. I suggest you communicate your trouble to your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them. You are not supposed to think about your exams all the time, which only makes you more stressed out. Instead, you should think about the progress you have made in your study, which will surely increase your own confidence. In addition, I advise you to do more exercise in your spare time to relieve your stress, because sports will also help you sleep better at night.

I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】本文是一篇信件類作文。要求以李明的名義寫一封信給英國交換生保羅，建議他如何在中國學習中減壓。考生在成文時應注意：合理發(fā)揮想象力，使文章的表達自然，豐滿。文章的寫作要點要齊全：1、將自己的問題告訴老師和同學，請求得到他們的幫助；2、不要總想著考試成績，多想想自己在哪些方面進步了，這樣就會給自己自信；3、多做運動，運動可以幫助自己緩解壓力（relieve one’s stress），并且有助睡眠。注意文章的人稱：以第二人稱為主。時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時。注意使用高級詞匯so as to，are not supposed to，Instead，In addition， get out of和句型，以提高文章的檔次；恰當使用一些連詞、插入語，使文章表達自然，流暢。注意次數(shù)：80—120之間。

【范文亮點】①You are not supposed to think about your exams all the time, which only makes you more stressed out.②you should think about the progress you have made in your study, which will surely increase your own confidence都運用了定語從句。