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18．高考臨近，許多家長用金錢、旅游等承諾鼓勵(lì)孩子努力學(xué)習(xí)，考上一所好大學(xué)．假定你是高三學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)所提供的有關(guān)信息，給某英文報(bào)社寫封短信．
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1．許多家長用金錢、旅游等承諾鼓勵(lì)孩子努力學(xué)習(xí)，考上一所好大學(xué)；
2．可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致學(xué)生只關(guān)注物質(zhì)獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)，而減少學(xué)習(xí)樂趣；
3．一旦獲得想要的獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)就失去了學(xué)習(xí)動(dòng)力；
4．你的建議．
注意：1．不要逐詞逐句地翻譯．
2．為使語句連貫，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．
3．詞數(shù)100左右．短信開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)．
Dear Editor，
With the college entrance examination approaching，
          ．
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇為書信．寫作要點(diǎn)為：1．許多家長用金錢、旅游等承諾鼓勵(lì)孩子努力學(xué)習(xí)，考上一所好大學(xué)；
2．可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致學(xué)生只關(guān)注物質(zhì)獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)，而減少學(xué)習(xí)樂趣；
3．一旦獲得想要的獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)就失去了學(xué)習(xí)動(dòng)力；
4．你的建議．

解答 Dear Editor，
With the college entrance examination approaching，many parents try to encourage their children to study hard and be admitted into a famous university．They promise that they will be rewarded with things such as money，traveling and so on once they achieve the goals．
However，I don't think this is a proper way．Firstly，it may lead to the fact that children's attention will focus on such things instead of the pleasure of studying．Secondly，they may stop working hard as soon as they get what they want．
I think a wise way is to make us aware of the importance of going to a good university．We should also study hard and well for our future．
Yours truly，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生需熟悉書信格式．考生需了解寫作要點(diǎn)及寫作意圖，合理安排寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時(shí)注意積累詞匯及語法知識(shí)．