Question

12．假定你是北大學(xué)生李華，得知學(xué)校正在招募暑期邊遠(yuǎn)山區(qū)支教的志愿者，你很感興趣，請(qǐng)給該項(xiàng)目負(fù)責(zé)人Peter寫一封申請(qǐng)信．內(nèi)容包括：
1．自我介紹（能力，性格，特長(zhǎng)等）
2．原因
3．愿望
注意：1）詞數(shù)100 左右；
2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3）開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好．
Dear Peter，
I am writing to reply to your advertisement for volunteers to teach at a primary school in the countryside．
                                                           
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封申請(qǐng)信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點(diǎn)明書信目的；二介紹自己的能力，性格，特長(zhǎng)等；三申請(qǐng)的原因；四表達(dá)愿望．
高分句型：
1．I can always get along well with children，which results from my outgoing personality．句子里which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指主句；get along well with 表示"和某人相處"；results from 表示"由于"．
由于我外向的性格，我能和孩子們相處融洽．
2．Besides，last year I had the chance to spend a month teaching at a local school，helping me gain much experience in teaching．句子里helping me gain much experience in teaching．做結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)，表示"使我獲得了很多教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)"．
此外，去年我有機(jī)會(huì)在當(dāng)?shù)氐膶W(xué)校進(jìn)行了一個(gè)月的教學(xué)活動(dòng)，這使我獲得了很多教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)．

解答 Dear Peter，
    I am writing to reply to your advertisement for volunteers to teach at a primary school in the countryside．I am really interested in getting a position as a volunteer．（點(diǎn)明書信目的）
   As an undergraduate in Beijing University，I believe I have the right abilities to do some volunteering work in a primary school．I can always get along well with children，which results from my outgoing personality．【高分句型一】In addition，I am active in sports like basketball and swimming．I think we can have great fun after class together．Besides，last year I had the chance to spend a month teaching at a local school，helping me gain much experience in teaching．【高分句型二】（介紹自己的能力，性格，特長(zhǎng)等）
    There are several reasons for me to apply for the job．Firstly，I'd like to learn more about the education in the countryside，and thus offer some help to those children．Also I can have a great chance to improve myself by teaching the children there，which may benefit the children as well．（申請(qǐng)的原因）
    All in all，I sincerely hope to get such a chance．I would be grateful if you could reply to me soon．（表達(dá)愿望）
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
寫作步驟：
第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時(shí)態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，避免填表式或履歷表式表達(dá)．
第二步：根據(jù)提綱，創(chuàng)造良好的開端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過渡，完美結(jié)尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，套用句型，上下銜接，地道表達(dá)，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．