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3．假如你是李明，你的朋友李華準(zhǔn)備到外企求職，必須具備一定的英語水平．請發(fā)e-mail告知他學(xué)習(xí)英語的方法．
提示：1．養(yǎng)成良好的英語學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣（如：…）；
2．多看英語電視和電影；擴(kuò)大詞匯量；
3．要有自信；多講，多用，不要怕出錯(cuò)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計(jì)入你所寫詞數(shù)）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你的朋友李華準(zhǔn)備到外企求職，必須具備一定的英語水平．請發(fā)e-mail告知他學(xué)習(xí)英語的方法．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：養(yǎng)成良好的英語學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣（如：…）；多看英語電視和電影；擴(kuò)大詞匯量；要有自信；多講，多用，不要怕出錯(cuò)．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：develop good habits形成好的習(xí)慣；look up查閱；do you a lot of good對你有好處；Furthermore而且；have a good knowledge of精通；Last but certainly not least最后同樣最重要；be afraid of害怕
Setting aside an hour each day to read English，learning English passages by heart，looking up the dictionary when coming across new words，to name a few，will surely do you a lot of good．（高分句型一）
That will not only teach you many English slangs and phrases which are widely used，but also develop your understanding of English culture．（高分句型二）
Just as an old saying goes，failure and success always come hand in hand．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Li Hua，
      I'm glad to offer you some advice．If you are to learn English well，the first step on the right way is to develop good habits．Setting aside an hour each day to read English，learning English passages by heart，looking up the dictionary when coming across new words，to name a few，will surely do you a lot of good．（高分句型一）
      Furthermore，it's a fair bet that you can have a good knowledge of English by watching English TV shows and movies．That will not only teach you many English slangs and phrases which are widely used，but also develop your understanding of English culture．（高分句型二）
      Last but certainly not least，it's your self-confidence that leads you to reach your goals and truly make a difference．So，why not speak and use English as much as possible？Just as an old saying goes，failure and success always come hand in hand．（高分句型三）Don't be afraid of making mistakes and just consider English as a piece of cake．Enjoy it!
                                                                                                                                                                                     Your sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Ming

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．