Question

【題目】假定你是李華，當假期來臨的時候，越來越多的人們選擇去名校參觀，但有的人反對將校園變?yōu)槁糜螀^(qū)。請你就此現(xiàn)象給英語筆友Peter寫封信闡述你的看法。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.信的開頭和結(jié)尾己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Peter,

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Best,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

How are you going these days?I'm writing this letter to share the topic of "Should universities be open to tourists?" with you.

Nowadays,more and more people enjoy their holidays by visiting famous universities.This phenomenon has led to heated debates concerning "Should universities be open to tourists".Some people believe that it is good to open universities to tourists while others argue against it.

Personally speaking,I'm in favor of university tourism,which benefits both tourists and universities.The beautiful scenery and the strong academic atmosphere of famous universities encourage tourists,especially students, to set goals and work hard to reach them.As for famous universities,being open to tourists serves as an effective approach to attracting talents from all over the country.

What's your opinion about the topic? I'm looking forwarding to your reply.

Best,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇書信類作文，針對當假期來臨的時候，越來越多的人們選擇去名校參觀，但有的人反對將校園變?yōu)槁糜螀^(qū)的現(xiàn)象來寫信表達自己的看法。

考生在寫這篇文章時，要注意以下幾點：

1.書信格式要正確，信件開頭結(jié)尾格式基本固定，根據(jù)題干要求對寫信對象進行調(diào)整。例如本篇作文中，收件人是Peter，寫信人為Li Hua。

2.書信一般要開門見山，交代下寫信件原因，便于讀信人了解書信重點，點明了這篇書信話題是關(guān)于“大學應(yīng)不應(yīng)該對游客開放”。

3.要點要齊全。但是不要對要點進行簡單的羅列�？梢允褂眠m當?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流暢。

4.注意文章要以一定的邏輯順序進行敘述，一定要把各方觀點敘述清楚，特別是注意闡述自己的觀點，細節(jié)把控要到位。否則會顯得說服力不夠，內(nèi)容不夠豐滿。

【范文亮點】

1. “Some people believe that it is good to open universities to tourists while others argue against it.”這里采用了“believe that……”的賓語從句，“that”后解釋了“believe”的內(nèi)容，使觀點更鮮明流暢。

2.第三段運用了Personally speaking連接詞，后面闡述了自己的觀點， 使文章行文流暢，邏輯清晰，觀點更明確。

3. .“As for famous universities,being open to tourists serves as an effective approach to attracting talents from all over the country.”此句“being open to tourists serves”動名詞用作主語，運用了高級句式，提高了文章整體的語言色彩。