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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

刪除：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Nowadays, the electric bicycle is developing fast, many kinds of that can be seen on the road. It is popular with more and more people. Why? The reasons are simply.

First of all, it is much convenient than taking a bus or taxi. What's more important is that it saves strength and goes fast, so the rider feel less tired. Also it is easy of anybody to ride, whether old or young. Finally, it is not only energy-saving but also environmentally friendly.

Every coin has the two sides. The electric bike also has it’s disadvantages. On the one hand, the rider may lose the alternative to be physical involved while riding, which is not beneficial to health. On the other hand, it may also lead to more traffic accidents. Personally, the electric bicycle does our more good than harm. As long as the rider drives carefully, the number of accidents can greatly reduced.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】that→ which 或在many前加and

【2】simply→simple

【3】much→more或在much后加more

【4】feel→feels

【5】of→for

【6】刪掉two前面的the

【7】it’s→its

【8】physical→physically

【9】our→us

【10】can后面加be

【解析】

試題分析：本文講述了電動自行車的優(yōu)勢和劣勢。

【1】that→ which 或在many前加and the electric bicycle作先行詞，指物，后面用which引導非限制性定語從句；如果在兩個分句之間加and構成并列句，則不必改that了。

【2】simply→simple be動詞后面用形容詞作表語，故把simply改為simple。

【3】much→more或在much后加more 根據后面的than可知，此句用比較級，convenient是多音節(jié)詞，構成比較級要在前面加more，much可以修飾比較級加強語氣，故把much改為more或在much后加more。

【4】feel→feels 句子是一般現在時態(tài)，主語是the rider，故把feel改為feels。

【5】of→for It is easy for sb. to do sth.“對于某人來說做某事容易”，故把of改為for。

【6】刪掉two前面的the Every coin has the two sides.每枚硬幣都有兩方面，這里不表示特指， the是多余的，故刪掉。

【7】it’s→its 句意：電動自行車也有它自己的優(yōu)勢。前面已經有主語和謂語了，這里應該用its，形容詞性物主代詞來修飾后面的名詞，故把it’s改為its。

【8】physical→physically 副詞修飾過去分詞，故把physical改為physically。

【9】our→us 固定詞組：do sb. good/harm對某人有益或有害，故把our改為us。

【10】can后面加be 句意：只要騎手小心騎，事故數量能極大的被減少。number與reduce是被動關系，故在can后加be。

【知識歸納】

1. 以e結尾的形容詞變成副詞時，有的直接加ly ;有的把e去掉再加ly.

possible---possibly；simple---simply；gentle---gently；terrible---terribly；true---truly；flexible---flexibly；immediate---immediately；brave---bravely；wise---wisely；active---actively

2. 下面的詞或詞組可以放在比較級前面修飾比較級加強語氣：much/even/a lot/a little/any/still/far/slightly/a great deal.

比如：I felt much happier.我感覺幸福多了。