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【題目】隨著智能手機的普及，“低頭族”也越來越多。假定你是李華，請根據(jù)以下要點提示，用英語給某編輯部寫一封讀者來信，以引起社會各界對此的廣泛關注

1. 描述這一現(xiàn)象；2. 分析其原因及弊端；3. 你認為該如何改變現(xiàn)狀。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 但可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭和結尾已給出，不記入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：低頭族phubbing 現(xiàn)象：phenomenon

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

I’m writing to you about a common phenomenon to draw it to the public attention.

With smart phones widely used, there are more and more Phubbings. As is often the case, when people are having meals, waiting for buses or even walking along streets, they are always addicted to their phones, heads hanging down, completely ignoring others.

The reason for the increasing number of phubbings everywhere is that smart phones nowadays can be used for people to do nearly everything, such as playing mobile games, shopping online and keeping in touch with friends through QQ. However, too much exposure to phones is harmful for their health and safety. Moreover, people engaged in phones fail to communicate well with those around them.

Personally, people should wisely use their phones to help with their work and study. Meanwhile they’d better care more about their family and friends rather than phones.

Best wishes to you!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】文章要求根據(jù)隨著智能手機的普及，“低頭族”也越來越多這一現(xiàn)象用英語給某編輯部寫一封讀者來信，以引起社會各界對此的廣泛關注。文章是書信格式，分為三部分來寫。第一部分描述這一現(xiàn)象的嚴重性，引起人們注意；第二部分分析其原因及弊端；最后一部分發(fā)表自己的觀點該如何改變現(xiàn)狀。

寫作時要求條理清楚，結構安排合理，還要注意高級詞匯和句型的使用來提高亮點。如With smart phones widely used是with的復合結構；表語從句that smart phones nowadays can be used for people to do nearly everything；be addicted to, engaged in, rather than等詞語和As is often the case, However, Moreover, Personally等連接詞。