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【題目】假定英語課課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

We all have a strong desire to succeed. For some the desire is great than that of the average people. In a fact, everyone wants to successful but every few are willing to pay the price of hard work. Success is an attitude and has no real secrets. It all start with your belief system. Your belief system starts with what you feel about yourself. You must first believe in yourself. On your journey to succeed, you will find that there are no shortcuts. You will never be able to completely master every detail of your life. Attempt to do so will only lead to disappointment. Beside, it’s necessary for you to have clear goals. You’d better put down your goals on paper which they are visible so that they can help to monitor your progresses.

Answer 1

【答案】1. great—greater

2. fact前的a 去掉

3.wants to 后面加he/successful—succeed

4. start—starts

5. what—how

6. succeed---success

7. Attempt---Attempting

8. Beside—Besides

9. which---where

10. progresses---progress

【解析】第一處：“For some the desire is greater than that of the average people.”因為有than ，相比于平均的人，有的人的欲望是很大的，所以用形容詞的比較級，故填greater。

第二處：In fact為固定搭配，意為“實際上”，故去掉a。

第三處：“everyone wants to succeed”意思是每個人都想要成功， want to do something ,意思是想要做某事，故此處用succeed.

第四處：start的主語是it，故應(yīng)該用第三人稱單數(shù)形式。故改為starts。

第五處：feel為連系動詞，how do you feel 的意思是你感覺怎么樣，故用how。

第六處：to為介詞，故用名詞作賓語。故第六行的succeed---success 。

第七處：考察動名詞短語作主語，要用doing形式。第七行的 Attempt---Attempting。

第八處：beside意指“在...旁邊”, 而besides則指“除...以外, 還有...”,由句意可知，作者想要表達的是除...以外, 還有的意思�！癇esides, it’s necessary for you to have clear goals”意思是除此之外，有明確的目標是必要的，故第八行的Beside—Besides。

第九處：從句是一個完整的句子，不需要which來充當任何句子成分，應(yīng)該用地點或時間來修飾，根據(jù)句意此處故用where。

第十處：progress是不可數(shù)名詞，意思是進程，前進，不能加es。最后一行的progresses---progress。