Question

15．班級(jí)要開學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)交流會(huì)，班長(zhǎng)讓你根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)的發(fā)言稿：課前預(yù)習(xí)；課堂活動(dòng)；課后作業(yè)；其他學(xué)習(xí)方法（至少兩項(xiàng)）．
注意：
1．文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．詞數(shù)：120左右；
3．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Boys and girls，
I feel honored to say something about learning English here．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇發(fā)言稿，介紹學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的經(jīng)驗(yàn)．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．課前預(yù)習(xí)；2．課堂活動(dòng)；3．課后作業(yè)；4．其他學(xué)習(xí)方式．
寫作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第一和第三人稱為主．
重要短語(yǔ)：feel honored to do （做某事覺得榮幸），preview the lessons（復(fù)習(xí)功課），make marks （作記號(hào)），listen to the teacher（聽老師講課），on time （準(zhǔn)時(shí)），in one's spare time （在某人空閑時(shí)間），pay attention to  （注意…），write down （寫下），keep sth in good order （使某事井井有條），learn sth by heart（背誦，記住…），May you+動(dòng)詞原形 （祝愿某人…）．
【高分句型】
1．In learning English，I think we should preview the lessons that the teacher will teach before class，making marks where we have questions．
這里是現(xiàn)在分詞making作伴隨狀語(yǔ)，主句為I think we should preview the lessons that the teacher will teach before class，主句的主語(yǔ)為I，與所給動(dòng)詞make存在邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系．
2．We should write down what the teacher have taught us and keep the notes in good order．
這里是由what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，在整個(gè)句子中作動(dòng)詞write down的賓語(yǔ)，賓語(yǔ)從句中使用陳述句語(yǔ)序，主語(yǔ)為the teacher 謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為 have taught，賓語(yǔ)為us．
3．When we have problems in learning English，we must turn to the teacher for help．
這里是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，主句為we must turn to the teacher for help．

解答 Boys and girls，
I feel honored to say something about learningEnglish here．In learning English，I think we should preview the lessons that the teacher willteach before class，making marks where we have questions．【高分句型】（課前預(yù)習(xí)）And in class，we should listen to theteacher carefully．（課堂活動(dòng)）After class，it is better to finish our homework on time．（課后作業(yè)）
   In our spare time，we must pay attention to our notes．We should write down whatthe teacher have taught us and keep the notes in good order．【高分句型】
   When we have problems in learning English，we must turn to the teacherfor help．【高分句型】It is very useful to learn good sentences by heart．It is also important to readaloud and read more English articles．（其他學(xué)習(xí)方法）
   May you study well．
   That's all．Thank you．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．