Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌系的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ ）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線（ ），并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.
My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help.
Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.
I thought the biscuits were really well.
My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked,
“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

Answer 1

【答案】去掉in；anything 改為something；better改成best；decide改成decided；step 改為steps；well改成good；after改成when/while；a改為the；just后加to；enjoy改為enjoying
【解析】試題文章介紹作者的教練退休了，在退休聚會(huì)上作者送給教練自己親手烘焙的餅干。教練非常高興。
1.句意：我的足球教練上個(gè)星期退休了，last week 前面不加介詞，去掉in。
2.句意：我想在他退休聚會(huì)上為他做些特別的事情，肯定句用something.
3.句意：我媽媽做的是世界上最好的餅干，用最高級(jí)，better改成best。
4.句意：所以我決定向她求助，這篇文章使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，decide 改成decided。
5.媽媽教我一些基本的烘焙的步驟。step是可數(shù)名詞，用復(fù)數(shù)steps。
6.句意：我認(rèn)為這些餅干很好，做表語(yǔ)用形容詞，well改成good。，
7.句意：我唯一的錯(cuò)誤是在我將它們打包的時(shí)候?qū)⑺鼈兊粼诘厣�。after 改成when/while
8.這里是特指第一段提到的退休聚會(huì)，a改為the。
9.句意：我可能明年要再退休一次，只是想得到更多這樣的餅干。用不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)，just后加to。
10.句意：我最喜歡的照片是我和我的教練在聚會(huì)上開(kāi)心地享受餅干，of后面接動(dòng)名詞，my coach and me 是邏輯主語(yǔ)，enjoy改為enjoying。