6．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號∧，并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
While took a walk with my pet dog this morning，I found the middle-aged man nearby was shouting on his phone．Obvious，he had a bad day．Before he left，I noticed his keys were on the ground．So I immediately picked up and ran away to find the man．Several minutes later，I found him，whom was still shouting on his phone beside his car．I walked to him and asked if he could hold on a little seconds．At first，he was angry about my interruption．Then I showed to his keys and explained the whole thing．On hearing my words，he immediately hang up his phone and apologized for his rude．

分析 本文主要講述作者遛狗時，發(fā)現(xiàn)附近一個人大聲打電話．在他離開后，他的鑰匙掉在了地上．作者撿起鑰匙，跑過去還給他，因打斷了他打電話，對此，這個人很惱火．在作者解釋了整個事情后，那人對剛才的粗魯表示歉意．

解答 While took a walk with my pet dog this morning，I found the middle-aged man nearby was shouting on his phone．Obvious，he had a bad day．Before he left，I noticed his keys were on the ground．So I immediately picked∧up and ran away to find the man．Several minutes later，I found him，whom was still shouting on his phone beside his car．I walked to him and asked if he could hold on a little seconds．At first，he was angry about my interruption．Then I showed to his keys and explained the whole thing．On hearing my words，he immediately hang up his phone and apologized for his rude．
詳解：
1．took改為taking 考查現(xiàn)在分詞．I與take之間是主謂關(guān)系，用現(xiàn)在分詞，此處是while+動詞現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語．
2．the改為a 考查冠詞． man是可數(shù)名詞，單數(shù)形式前加不定冠詞a表示泛指．
3．Obvious改為Obviously 考查副詞．修飾句子要用副詞．
4．Before 改為After 考查連詞．根據(jù)句意：在他離開后．用連詞after．
5．加them 考查代詞．pick up是及物動詞短語，缺少賓語，用them作其賓語，因是人稱代詞，要放在up前面．
6．whom改為who 考查定語從句．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個定語從句，先行詞him在從句中作主語，用關(guān)系代詞who．
7．little改為few 考查詞語用法．seconds是可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，用a few修飾，a little修飾不可數(shù)名詞．
8．去掉to 考查詞語用法．show是及物動詞，后接名詞或代詞作賓語時不需要帶介詞to．
9．hang改為hung 考查動詞時態(tài)．全文講述的是已發(fā)生的事情，用一般過去時．
10．rude改為rudeness 考查名詞．for是介詞，后接名詞作賓語．

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強的實用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學生習作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進行逐句改錯．其次，要進行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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