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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Last week, I received one of the students from the US, which name was Mike. The first day, I went to pick him up at the Capital Airport and we chatted happy along the way. On the second day, we paid a visit with the famous Maoer Hutong, where we had an interesting rickshaw（黃包車）tour. Mike became very exciting about the driver’s introduction to the history of Hutong. The following day, I took him to Mei Lanfang Grand Theatre to watch Beijing Opera. Although he could understand few words, but he was still amazed to seeing the colorful costumes and the unique way of performing. When it was time of him to return to the US, I send him some gifts with Chinese elements, such as a Beijing Opera mask and a Chinese knot. He was very grateful for I had done and said him was really impressed by the rich Chinese culture.

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【解析】文章大意：本文講述作者帶美國學(xué)生Mike參觀中國傳統(tǒng)文化。

第一處：定語從句關(guān)系詞用法錯誤。句中先行詞為one，在從句中作名詞name的定語，故用關(guān)系代詞whose。句意：他的名字叫邁克。故將which改為whose。

第二處： 詞性用法錯誤。修飾動詞chat用副詞形式。句意：我們一路上歡快的聊天。故將happy改為happily。

第三處：介詞用法錯誤。短語pay a visit to參觀。句意：我們參觀了著名的茅屋胡同。故將with改為to。

第四處：形容詞用法錯誤。短語become excited about對……感到激動。句意：邁克對司機的歷史介紹感到非常興奮。故將exciting改為excited。

第五處：連詞用法錯誤。連詞Although不可再與but連用。句意：雖然他能聽懂很少的話，但他仍然驚訝地看到了五彩繽紛的服裝。故將but去掉。

第六處：動詞用法錯誤。句中的to為不定式，故用動詞原形。句意：但他仍然驚訝地看到了五彩繽紛的服裝。故將seeing改為see。

第七處：介詞用法錯誤。短語It’s time for sb. to do sth.該某人做某事的時候了。句意：當(dāng)他該回美國的時候。故將of改為for。

第八處：時態(tài)用法錯誤。根據(jù)文中時態(tài)可知用一般過去時。句意：我送給他一些中國元素的禮物。故將send改為sent。

第九處：名詞性從句用法錯誤。賓語從句中動詞done缺少賓語，故用關(guān)系詞what引導(dǎo)。句意：他非常感激我所做的一切。故在for后加what。

第十處：代詞用法錯誤。這里代詞作主語，故用主格形式。句意：中國豐富的文化給他留下了深刻的印象。故將him改為he。