【題目】假定你是李華,是你校學(xué)生會主席,暑假將帶隊去英國友好學(xué)校交流。請你給對方負(fù)責(zé)人Mr. Smith寫信洽談相關(guān)事項。內(nèi)容包括:

1.訪問的具體時間;

2.希望參加的活動(參觀歷史博物館、會議交流、游覽著名景點)。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計人總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr. Smith,

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

I'm Li Hua, chairman of the student union. Planning to take a group to pay a visit to your school next month, I'm writing to confirm some information.

We will arrive at 9 a.m. on July 20, and then we will begin the 2-day visit. We have a very tight schedule. As has been planned, we will visit the school history museum, because we are all extremely interested in the splendid history of your school. Then we will have a communicating meeting, where we students can communicate with each other and exchange opinions on society, culture, education and So on. Besides, we will visit some places of interest, which is what we have been longing for. I hope we will have a meaningful trip there!

Looking forward to your reply!

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,要求考生給對方負(fù)責(zé)人Mr. Smith寫信洽談去英國友好學(xué)校交流的相關(guān)事項。

第一步: 審題

體裁: 應(yīng)用文

時態(tài):根據(jù)提示,時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu): 總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說,把支持句作為分說,并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求:

1. 訪問的具體時間;

2.希望參加的活動(參觀歷史博物館、會議交流、游覽著名景點)。

第二步: 列提綱 (重點詞組)

be interested in;communicate with;look forward to

第三步: 連詞成句

I'm Li Hua, minister of external liaison of our school.

Planning to take a group to pay a visit to your school next month, I'm writing to confirm some information.

As has been planned, we will visit the school history museum, because we are all extremely interested in the splendid history of your school.

Then we will have a communicating meeting, where we students can communicate with each other and exchange opinions on society, culture, education and So on.

Besides, we will visit some places of interest, which is what we have been longing for.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞(組)進(jìn)行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步: 連句成篇 (銜接詞)

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second,And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for

4.表因果關(guān)系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡,書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰,

第五步: 潤色修改

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