Question

【題目】請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字及圖標(biāo)，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150字左右的文章。

1.Hold fast to dreams For if dreams die life is a broken-winded bird That can never fly. Hold,fast to dreams For when dreams go Life is a barren field From only with snow	2.Strong belief is everything in wishing.If you don’t believe in your own power to make your wish come true,your wish will fly away,never to be seen again.If you’re wishing for something possible,then it may be possible for you to do whatever you need to make it come true.The ultimate magic is not wishing,but doing.
3.Once a teacher received a paper from a boy where he described the dream of owning a 200-acrc horse ranch and a large house.He graded it with a red F,thinking it was an unrealistic dream.Though asked to change it (he boy stated,“You can keep the F and I’ll keep my dream.” Many years later,the boy made it a reality.	■ 85% have a dream ■ 78% have a dream but give up ■ 7％ have a dream and realize it

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1.用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；

2.結(jié)合上述信息，簡(jiǎn)要闡述堅(jiān)持夢(mèng)想的重要性；

3.談?wù)勀愕膲?mèng)想 ，并分析實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的必要要素（不少于兩點(diǎn)）。

【寫怍要求】

1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱：

3.不必寫標(biāo)題。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】Most people have a dream but those who make it a reality are few and far between. Therefore , what counts is to have the same determination as the boy did.

Life without a dream proves to be a frozen field. However, the dream turns out to be an empty slogan unless you devote the constant efforts to fulfilling it. Nobody can achieve anything without persistence. Accordingly, one of the secret to success is holding fast to your dream whatever it happens.

I have a dream that one day I can make a commitment to the education in the remote places where children are thirsty for knowledge. I hope that my devotion will make a difference to their lives. To realize the dream not only should I equip myself with abundant knowledge but also inspire more people to join me in helping those poor children .After all , many hands make light work.

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文。根據(jù)閱讀題干可知：a.用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；b.結(jié)合上述信息，簡(jiǎn)要闡述堅(jiān)持夢(mèng)想的重要性；c.談?wù)勀愕膲?mèng)想 ，并分析實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的必要要素（不少于兩點(diǎn)）。

同時(shí)要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

1.通篇以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。

2. 要點(diǎn)要齊全。但是不要對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的羅列�？梢允褂眠m當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流程。

3.注意邏輯性，既要闡述堅(jiān)持夢(mèng)想的重要性，又要闡述實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的重要因素。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

1. 文章層次分明，要點(diǎn)齊全，既論述了夢(mèng)想的重要性，又結(jié)合自身實(shí)際談?wù)摿藨?yīng)如何實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想。

2.此外，文章還運(yùn)用了＂To realize the dream not only should I equip myself with abundant knowledge but also inspire more people to join me in helping those poor children .＂倒裝句以及“Most people have a dream but those who make it a reality are few and far between.”定語從句。