分析 本文是一篇提綱作文.根據(jù)所提供的材料信息,向公交車(chē)公司寫(xiě)一封投訴信,投訴該公交車(chē)司機(jī)的不文明行為.
寫(xiě)作時(shí)人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)和第三為主,時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主.
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn):1.司機(jī)的不文明行為(聊天、緊急剎車(chē)、態(tài)度粗魯?shù)龋?2.希望盡快查清此事;
重要短語(yǔ):complain about (抱怨),not only…,but also…(不但…,而且…),keep on doing (一直做某事),advise sb to do sth(建議某人做某事),concentrate on (集中在…),pay attention to doing (注意某事),bear sth (忍受某事),keep sth in mind(把…記在腦海中),lose one's balance(失去平衡),It's none of your business (不關(guān)某人的事),investigate this incident (調(diào)查這個(gè)事故),take proper measures (采取適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧?br />【高分句型】
1.Last Sunday,I was taking a bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast.
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"whose"引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句,先行詞為"bus",whose bus=the bus+of which=of which+the bus.
2.Then another passenger couldn't bear it,asking the driver to keep the passengers'safety in mind.
此處是由現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作伴隨狀語(yǔ),主句為"Then another passenger couldn't bear it",主句的主語(yǔ)"another passenger"與所給動(dòng)詞"ask"存在邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系.
解答 Dear Sir,
I am Li Hua.I am writing to complain about one of your bus-drivers'improper and rude behaviors.(開(kāi)頭---引出話(huà)題)
Last Sunday,I was taking a bus whose driver not only kept on talking with a man loudly but also drove very fast.【高分句型】So some passengers advised him to concentrate on driving,but he didn't pay any attention.What's worse,he drove even faster.Then another passenger couldn't bear it,asking the driver to keep the passengers'safety in mind.【高分句型】But the driver stopped the bus so suddenly that all the passengers nearly lost their balance.However,he didn't apologize but said rudely"It's none of your business."(司機(jī)的不文明行為(聊天、緊急剎車(chē)、態(tài)度粗魯?shù)龋?/p>
點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次,平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型.
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