【題目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)學(xué)生張華,你的朋友李明來(lái)信。在信中他提到他母親不論在旅游時(shí)還是在生活中,總是未經(jīng)許可就把他的照片發(fā)到微信朋友圈(WeChat Moments),這讓他十分煩惱。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封回信,給李明提一些具體的建議并說(shuō)明理由。

【答案】Dear Li Ming

Thank you for your email and I think you should not worry about this matter too much. You mentioned that your mother would post your photos on WeChat Moments without your permission. However, you did not tell me what exactly annoys you.

In my opinion, whatever the reason is, you should try to communicate with your mother. Tell her about your feelings and you should be able to work this out together. For example, if you feel insecure about having your pictures shared, you can kindly ask her to post those photos after speaking to you. As teenagers, it is normal to feel upset when your parents are doing something you do not like. The key to the issue is always communication.

That's all. Please let me know if you have further questions. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Zhang Hua

【解析】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文,要求考生寫(xiě)一封回信,就李明的煩惱,給李明提一些具體的建議并說(shuō)明理由。

第一步:審題

體裁:應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài):根據(jù)提示,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu):總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō),把支持句作為分說(shuō),并以這種方式安排所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容。

要求:1. 說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信目的:提建議

2. 具體內(nèi)容:

1)建議與媽媽交流

2)要求媽媽在征求你的意見(jiàn)后在傳照片

第二步:列提綱 (重點(diǎn)詞組)

worry aboutwithout your permission;in my opinioncommunicate with;be able to for example;ask sb. to do

第三步:連詞成句

1. Thank you for your email and I think you should not worry about this matter too much.

2. You mentioned that your mother would post your photos on WeChat Moments without your permission.

3. You did not tell me what exactly annoys you.

4. Whatever the reason is, you should try to communicate with your mother.

5. Tell her about your feelings and you should be able to work this out together.

6. If you feel insecure about having your pictures shared, you can kindly ask her to post those photos after speaking to you.

7. As teenagers, it is normal to feel upset when your parents are doing something you do not like.

8. The key to the issue is always communication.

9. Please let me know if you have further questions.

10. Looking forward to your reply.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞(組)進(jìn)行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步:連句成篇(銜接詞)

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡,書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰,

第五步:潤(rùn)色修改

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