Question

【題目】請閱讀下面圖畫，按要求用英語寫一篇詞數(shù)為100左右的短文。

內(nèi)容要求：1.描述畫面（四個盲人摸象）

2.概述其意義并談?wù)剛�人感想

注意：1．短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2．可適當發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；

3．文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。

In the picture,____________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】In the picture, we can see there are 4 blind men feeling different parts of an elephant’s body trying to figure out what it is like.

This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The man on its back insisted it was like a rough mat, while the man who happened to touch the teeth argued that it was actually like a carrot. Disagreeing with both of them the third man leaning against its body believed firmly that it was like a wall. Finally, the fourth man holding its tail believed in the shape of a grass rope.

Of courts, none of them is right, since they just take part of a thing as the whole. Judging things from as many sides as possible is a skill that needs improving all the way. We should draw lessons from this picture and don’t be short-sighted.

【解析】這是一篇圖畫類書面表達。要求描述畫面，并闡述意義及個人觀點。本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。對畫面的描寫具體，并能表達出自己的看法。

【亮點說明】本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)合理，能夠?qū)�畫面�?nèi)容完全表達出來，而且闡述了這幅畫給我們的啟示，完全符合作文的要求。作者在范文中使用了較多的復(fù)雜句式，例如The man on its back insisted it was like a rough mat, while the man who happened to touch the teeth argued that it was actually like a carrot.在這句話中作者使用了while表示前后的對比，而且還包含賓語從句，定語從句，是一個非常高級的句式。這也顯示出了作者深厚的英語功底。