Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

There was once a farmer who had a fine olive orchard. He was very hardworking, and the farm always prospered(蒸蒸日上) under his care. But he knew that his three sons did not like the farm work, and were eager to reach the goal at a single leap.

When the farmer felt that his time had come to die, he called the three sons to him and said, “My sons, there is a pot of gold hidden in the olive orchard. Dig for it, if you wish it.” After the farmer was dead, the sons went to work to find the pot of gold.” Since they did not know where the hiding-place was, they agreed to begin in a line, at one end of the orchard, and to dig until one of them should find the money.

They dug until they had turned up the soil from one end of the orchard to the other, round the tree-roots and between them. But no pot of gold was to be found. It seemed as if someone must have stolen it, or as if the farmer had been wandering in his wits. The three sons were bitterly disappointed to have all their work for nothing. The next olive season, the olive trees in the orchard bore more fruit than they had ever given; when it was sold, it gave the sons a whole pot of gold.

And when they saw how much money had come from the orchard, they suddenly understood what the wise father had meant when he said, “There is gold hidden in the orchard. Dig for it, if you wish.”

寫作內(nèi)容:

1. 以30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。

2. 以約120個詞就“Dig for it, if you wish it.”的話題談?wù)勀愕南敕�，�?nèi)容包括：

①你對這句話的理解。

②試舉例說明。

③這個故事給你的啟發(fā)。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version

The story narrates that a dying farmer instructed his three sons to dig for a pot of hidden gold in his orchard, through which they eventually understood their hardworking father’s intention. (31個詞)

The story sets me thinking we should be dedicated to the goal of life. However, it’s not uncommon in our life that there do exist many people who are dying to seek a fortune by virtue of luck rather than through steadfast diligence. Anyway, Rome is not built in one day.

Once a young man, JiaZuosheng, who dropped out of middle school due to poverty, has had an unbelievable craze for English since his childhood. He took his position as a security officer at Tsinghua University, bearing the dream to hone English both at work and during the intervals. Though living in adversity, he eventually realized his dream.

Just as a saying goes, “You reap what you sow.” It is devotion and perseverance that pay off.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是話題作文，但同時也要概括上文。寫作時注意按照寫作內(nèi)容的要求分兩部分來寫，一是概括上文內(nèi)容，二是針對所給話題進(jìn)行闡述。在針對話題進(jìn)行闡述的時候，要根據(jù)所給的三點(diǎn)進(jìn)行，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)連貫，同時也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】However, it’s not uncommon in our life that there do exist many people who are dying to seek a fortune by virtue of luck rather than through steadfast diligence. 運(yùn)用固定句式；Once a young man, JiaZuosheng, who dropped out of middle school due to poverty, has had an unbelievable craze for English since his childhood. 運(yùn)用定語從句；Just as a saying goes, “You reap what you sow.”運(yùn)用固定俗語；The story narrates that a dying farmer instructed his three sons to dig for a pot of hidden gold in his orchard, through which they eventually understood their hardworking father’s intention.此句式為文章增色，顯得文章很有檔次。